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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 12

Hope there will be more.  Thanks

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 6:22 pm Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter.  Thanks for telling who Collier is.  I remembered him from the party when you explained it.  No sympathy for Mikey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Happy Halloween to you !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 12

Not surprising Ethan is avoiding responsibility he must be related to Michael.

Did enjoy him having to deal with Michael's sick all over him.

I do hope he gets what's coming to him very soon.

Collier Hartline is the one who questioned Gus and is stalking Justin, he is extremely violent so everyone is on high alert until this psycho is caught.

No wonder Justin didn't recognize him he is one of those people Ethan enjoys having around to kiss his Ass, Justin had better things to do with his time then hang around anyone who thought Ethan was more important.

Ethan's need to be Grand (Michael 1.0), Amazing brought a delusional person to Justin's door. (Funny It Still Sounds Like Michael <shrugs>)

Hope Michael went to jail again and gets a bill for the mess he made :)

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 1:19 pm Title: Chapter 12

Another highly interesting chapter.  The mystery deepens.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:29 am Title: Chapter 12

So in the end, it all inadvertently, lead back to the slimy Chinrat. God I hate that guy! He's another one, not only the character he played, but the real life person, I can't stand either. Anyway, it sounds like Collier is a loose cannon. A missing loose cannon.  I don't think Justin will hold any grudge against Eric, especially since he's already aware of the affair. But, Ethan better hide. Because Justin and Brian are going to skin him alive if they see him. But then, Ethan will probably have to wait it out in jail for a while. Unless he can get old cheapskate Novotny to cough up the money, which I doubt. They will have to get Justin to draw a picture of him, with Eric explaining what he looks like with the new 'doo. I'm thinking when it's explained to Justin who Collier is, he might have an idea what the guy looks like.

So Michael is a falldown, vomiting drunk. Not surprised. Both him and Ethan are gonna reek come morning, especially if Ethan has to do some jail time. He better learn gag reflex really quick.

Great update. Well the cat's out of the bag. They just need a surefire way to find and confine Collier. No jail right away, if he's able to pay bail.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:51 am Title: Chapter 12

HA! StarBaby, I LOVE the way you think!! You took the most abstract, and probably unremarkable character of the "Ethan Era" and made him relevant in the most vicious way. Great job!! I can't wait to read how all of this plays out. Now we not only have a name, but a lunatic with unlimited funds, even if his parents are supposedly controlling his trust fund. Somehow, all I can think of is that he is like Michael and Lindsay, where he only shows the side of himself that he wants people to believe, yet he's rotten underneath all that sweetness. Should be interesting to see exactly what Collier's family believes when they find out he's stalking Justin.

Michael+Ethan= People who should have been swallowed, instead of birthed. Film at eleven!

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2018 4:32 am Title: Chapter 12

Collier was such a pretentious ass; Justin's words were great towards the guy.

Ethan and Michael: what a duo of losers!

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