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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2018 11:23 am Title: Chapter 16

I didn't realize part of a bodyguard's job description included babysitting. And for no really good reason. Good thing Mel walked in on Lindsay's conversation with Deb and heard it from Lindsay's mouth about the affair. With. A. Man.  Otherwise, I have to wonder how forthcoming Lindsay would have been. It would serve her lying, cheating ass if Mel asked her to leave for a while. And yes, this situation could prove troublesome for Gus.

It's so refreshing when Deb doesn't fall for Michael's bullshit, instead of standing up for him and condoning everything he does. Although I enjoy stories like that, like I said, this is refreshing. Apologize for giving birth to him? You Go Deb!

My-oh-my, but Collier has bit off more than he can chew. First he's got the idiot running around, and telling the Peterson's he's Brian's best friend, is not going to make brownie points with Brian if that tidbit of information gets back to him Then Collier staging his accidental meeting with the Peterson's, might blow up in his face when Mommy Maria comes to Pittsburgh, if Jennifer should decide to have a little chat with her when Maria gets to town.

Good update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2018 7:40 am Title: Chapter 16

Now that Lindsey's secret is out, she should go back to her family and make a point.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2018 12:49 am Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  Love this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2018 12:21 am Title: Chapter 16

Deb the voice of reason.  I like.  Michael doesn't know how to manipulate, maybe Collier can fix that.  I like that Mel is talking to Lindsay rather then at Lindsay.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 16

Well Melanie knows about the affair where they from here is their choice just so long as Gus isn't hurt all will be good.

Maria Hartline is coming to town maybe she would like a front row seat to her son's behavior so they can stop pretending it is just a crush that went a little too far <eye roll>

Nancy and Lynette want all the notables at this wedding perhaps they should be careful what they wish for?

Collier turned Michael into a low rate Justin who still can't get any respect, it will take more than just dropping Brian's name for people to look at him, as for the ugly Justin clone look Collier is really off his rocker if he thinks Michael will be able to pull that off.

Deb meeting Justin's family went very well they will probably have a lot of fun getting to know one another. :)

 

Reviewer: Resa13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2018 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 16

I get so excited every time I see an update from you and I'm never disappointed. I have read and re-read all of your stories and love them all. I think this one has the potential to become one my favourites. It's a wonderful read so far. thanks for doing what you do and the hours of enjoyment I have gotten from getting lost in the worlds you create x0x

 

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