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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh that vindictive nincompoop! Michael knew he was lying the whole time he was spinning his tall tale. Well, I don't think Brian is going to be very forgiving, and Emmett is going to be furious when that paper comes out; outing him and Drew. Nothing like selling out your friend. And if dear, little Mikey thinks Brian's gonna answer that phone... Sorry, Mikey; not gonna happen.

Well, Debbie gave Michael a piece of her mind before giving him the old heave-ho. And I'm fairly sure she's not gonna change her mind. I have to wonder if Michael even has any money to rent a place. Even if it wasn't the end of the tour, I doubt Michael would have a job anymore after this stunt.

So apparently they have been together for two years, and married for one of them. Correct? So it doesn't sound like anybody within their circle was aware of the marriage, itself, so did someone at the chapel sell them out?

Loving this story. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 5:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

Is it wrong of me to wish that Deb hit that little ingrate harder? OMG! The absolute NERVE of him! Strangely, I also hope that sneaky, sniveling reporter also gets slammed for listening to the jealous, ill-informed ravings of a 'towel boy'. Michael thinking that he'll just give Debbie time to cool off before coming to her with his 'I didn't mean it' mantra is going to be so pathetic, especially once Brian and Emmett gets wind of what Michael spewed to that reporter. 

Em and Drew are going to be such gems to Brian and Justin throughout all of this! Not only will Brian and Justin have to deal with the voracious reporters, but with a childish hanger-on, who will now basically be homeless and jobless. I hope Ted fires Michael immediately and without a second thought! Brian and Emmett should have left Whiny Wonder and his banging drum ass behind ages ago. I think that as Em said, it's a good thing all of this is coming out now while Brian is on break, if for no other reason than to reduce their entourage by one 145 pound lazy, loud-mouthed schmuck!

I can't wait for MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Already married and little Mikey didn't know for a couple of years. Good going guys.

Liking this from the very beginning.

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG,  What a great start to a new story.  Love the pairing of Brian and Emmett and Ben and Blake.  And, of course, enough of annoying Mikey to make the story interesting.  Can't wait to see where you go from here.  Absolutely love your stories.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 2:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

StarBaby! I swear from word one you always have me HOOKED! And whereas I always want to punch Whiny Wonder in his throat to permanenly shut his voice up, this time I want to leave him in a foreign country without his wallet or a means to communicate with anyone he knows! What a MOOCHER and PARASITE, and yet the story hasn't even begun!

Strangely, I'm wondering if Ted leaked the information to the press in sort of a reverse-protective move. The power of building their relationship was in their privacy, but I suspect with Wonder Brat's continual interference to get Brian to be what he wants, exposure will be the only way to preserve what Brian and Justin have found with each other. I can't wait to see all of this unfold! 

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Craptastic!!!!

How the Hell Did They Find Out?!!

Michael needs to stop riding Brian's coattails and found a life of his own. (Yeah That Will Never Happen!!)

Brian, Emmett and Ted have grown past Michael and his need to be the center of the universe.

Nice that Brian has a Safe Haven with Justin who just wants Brian and not his Fame.

Michael is the Fame Whore!!!

However the press found out I worry about Michael being worse than the paparazzi.

He is trying to keep Gus from Brian so why not his husband too.

Yep Totally Hooked Now! :)

 

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

this is a very cruel cliffhanger!!! now i will be checking for an update every hour lol!!! but truth be told i have a feeling this story will be one of my very favorites ever!!! 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 6:46 am Title: Chapter 1

OH MY! Already a new story. And I'm Absolutely Hooked! Michael is all kinds of repulsively vile! (Are we surprised?) I love the premise of this story. It's very unique.

How long have Brian and Justin been married? They've been together for a long time (before getting married), I have to wonder how their cover was blown now, especially if the only people present were the people from the chapel. Are Emmett, Mel and Linds aware they are actually married? Or have they kept that secret from them, too?

It sounds like Michael loves riding on Brian's coattails. He even wanted to keep Brian from seeing his son, in order to be seen with him. *shudders*  That's what I don't understand about this... How could Michael not see Brian, NOT tricking for over a year? That's why I was curious to the exact timeline.

I'm certainly looking forward to more of this. Thank you for already starting another story.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Resa13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 4:27 am Title: Chapter 1

I love your writing style and your stories. I've reread all of them and my favourites several times. This one is already shaping up to be a favourite I think. So excited to read more.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 3:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice start!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 20, 2018 3:47 am Title: Chapter 1

You write the most unique stories.  I can't wait to see were we go with this one.

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