Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2019 6:23 pm Title: Chapter 8: 10 Minutes

Again, there are so many beautiful, cute and hilarious moments in this chapter!

I love this scene in the kitchen, cooking, swaying and humming together - so cute! But even after Brian‘s declaration of love (because that‘s what it was!) in the last chapter, Justin‘s still seems so be so insecure about his feelings. „caring moments demanded a certain non-reaction" - sad but true like so often in the show for example the whole zucchini-man-disaster. Those were the kind of tricking-scenes which I really hated to see in the Show, done just because of Brian‘s own insecurities and to put Justin in his place... Therefore, I really like the way you let them handle the tricking so far. They way you write it, it just seems natural, there is nothing hurtful about it and as long as both are content with it, why not... although, I must admit I like stories in which Brian not suddenly stop to trick but reduces it slowly until he realises he just don‘t need this kind of excitement or self-affirmation any longer... But I can totally understand that Justin is annoyed by these compassionate looks and lack of understanding of the others.

Oh, and then this hilarious scene with tori and the female version of Brian! Amazing! I really like your idea of them becoming friends together to people outside the normal circle.

Oh man, and as if Justin hasn't already enough to deal with, he has to listen to the shit Ben says, who thinks he knows about Justin and the reasons for the depression. I'm just glad, Justin made his point. Great chapter!

 

Author's Response:

Thank you again for such a thoughtful comment.

I certainly like fics where Brian and Justin are eventually monogamous but I'm never going to write that fic just because I love portraying non-monogamy in a good light. Sure there are stressors there but monogamous relationships have stressors too, just different ones. 

I'm excited for you to keep reading because you're going to see development on both their parts where they become more comfortable with each other and being secure in their relationship. Yes, when it comes to feelings, Brian will always be a little feral but he does mellow. Brian and Justin just have different ways of communicating that they love each other. They may not use the words, but they do (or will) know how they each feel. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2018 7:37 am Title: Chapter 8: 10 Minutes

Amazing chapter! Brian in the kitchen was to die for. I hope they will see more Tori and Ana, who could be new friends for both Justin and Brian. Did Brian really go with a trick or did he call Tori?

Ben's advice was on point, but a little "what I would do" while he doesn't have all the clues.

Author's Response:

Oh, he went to trick. No big deal to him or Justin, just to everyone else. I'm glad you're liking Tori and Ana!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2018 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 8: 10 Minutes

This is amazing and so right.  You're doing an amazing job!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!