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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

The shaving could be highly sensual; I remember such a scene with hair in a quite unknown and beautiful movie ("The nephew" with Pierce Brosnan); with a few funny moments.

Justin's distraction techniques are very effective: another big step for Brian.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 3:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

“Did I mention you are a freak?”  Is that the consenses here? Poor Brian. Justin really hit him out of the blue with the jerking off comment. But we love our freak, and I wouldn't want him any other way. The positive though is that he actually got Brian to hold the coffee cup for a while.

So maybe we have a clue now who the two lovers were. Good deduction on Justin's part.

As soon as I got to the 'wankfest', I figured I better shut my computer down and wait until the others went to bed. Good thing too. How Justin's mind wanders, cracks me up. And thinking about how Daphne would react.... Comedy in it's best. And I LOVED the song choice for this chapter. It fits Justin so perfectly.

Loving this story more with each chapter. But I have to admit I am most looking forward to the "Justin Shaves Eggy" chapter. God, I can just imagine Justin's internal dialogue during that.

Got a request for you ladies. Since Christmas is around the corner, maybe you ladies can grace up with a 'Christmas Special', and have Justin and His Man spend the day together.  (Cathy looks hopefully at Tag and Sally with puppy-dog eyes.) It can even be short and sweet. Because I bet Brian has never had that happen before.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: TrueIllusion Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 1:35 am Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

I’m proud of Brian too. *sniff* Very nice. Can’t wait to see how the rest goes.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 1:04 am Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

An entire winter break with bratty Justin? Eggy doesn't stand a chance, LOL!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 12:21 am Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

Great update.  Small steps, but any steps are progress.  The story just gets more interesting as you go along. Fantastic job.  Happy Holidays.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2018 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop

Well, things appear to be improving a little.  Love the details you have manage to ferret out about Carnegie.

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