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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2019 3:00 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Bizarre Love Triangle

Ah-ha! I figured way back with Alma's letter that it was a man she caught her 'Jay' with. But you did surprise me with the three-way. I was thinking with Billy's growing quietness, that he was having second thoughts about Peebles, and had fallen for Jay. I suppose maybe his unease might be later discovered.

Ethan... the sniveling, uppity, wannabe. I was hoping Justin would put him 'in his place'. Take that Ethan, I've been apart of that society since being born. hehe... I'm waiting for Z to see him for what he really is. I hate the little shit, myself. So, yeah, I was happy to read what Justin had to say to him. It kind of knocked the wind out the little creep for a minute.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2019 2:01 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Bizarre Love Triangle

Changing the name of the building will bring about other branches to this story.  So you might be looking at a longer timeline on finishing. 



Author's Response:

Lol! Nah, we’re right on track with this story. I’m guessing ~5 more chapters... Glad you’re enjoying it tho. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2019 10:01 am Title: Chapter 30 - Bizarre Love Triangle

Ethan is so full of himself: so glad Justin was able to deflate him.

I'm surprised regarding Brian being a stud: I understood that he was secluded since his grandfather's death which happened when he was young. Maybe I have a wrong timing in mind.

I love this quote from Justin: "I asked, breathlessly, more than ready to be pretzeled". I can't wait to read this part coming to life.



Author's Response:

 In my head, Brian was well on his way to becoming the Stud we all know and love before the OCD set in. Back in high school and early college, he would’ve been a domineering top. It wasn’t till after his grandfather died that he isolated himself from the rest of the world.  But even now, underneath the OCD, he is still got the same character traits: he’s a dominant male, a top, a stud, he just can’t show it. Hope that explains it. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2019 1:52 am Title: Chapter 30 - Bizarre Love Triangle

Absolutely wonderful as usual.  I was so happy to see a new chapter that I did my happy chapter dance!  LOL With so many writers taking a bit of a break is is great to get a new chapter from my favorite 2 writers.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Awwww! Shucks! *Blushing* TAG

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