[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2019 6:19 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
Whoa, that was intense! From top to bottom!!! You made quite a momentous chapter for Brian (and Justin as well). He went into the tunnel, he touched blood, he didn't use a condom. That was huge!
Craig was totally insane and so dangerous. But, the result was so worth it!
Ethan was in his worse behaviour and made the potential mess a reality. What an awful person.
Date: Jul 16, 2019 9:11 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE BRIAN IN THIS STORY!!!
He's still Brian, but with a kinder, softer side. And yes, Brian Kinney DOES cuddle... no one can ever say differently.
NOW!!! THAT yellowed-belly Ethan... ought to have been punched in the nose for his belated efforts. I'm not sure if we will get a school setting in the next chapter, but if so, I'd love to see him humiliated in front of all the other guys!
Whoo-Hoo! Brian to the rescue! Just goes to show what he will do for his 'Brat'... besides he got a few licks in there to Craig.
CRAIG!! That insufferable homophobic prick. Well, let's just say with a live feed, they need to take it to the police station. I doubt Justin will lose his College fund then as I'm sure his mother would have a whole lot to say regarding that matter. Besides, the prick should be put in jail for trying to kill Justin.
I have really enjoyed the few times you ladies have interwoven canon into this story.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2019 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
I love this Brian and Justine,,,soo cute....Do not want this story to end
Date: Jul 13, 2019 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
I was getting so nervous when Craig was attacking Justin, that I forgot that Justin had been Face-timing with Eggy. I didn't know how Brian was going to be able to save him!
Now, for a completely random thought... Just the other day, my local radio station had been talking about some viral Twitter or Facebook thread. People were arguing about whether or not you wash your legs when you're in the shower. One side said, "absolutely, you wash your whole body." The other side said, "don't be silly, your legs get clean as the soap runs down from the top of your body." Both sides were adament that their way was correct.
Now, personally... I am team "whole body" including feet. I had never even considered the other option! But, I'm surprised our OCD Egbert seems to be on the other side of the argument! I mean, otherwise he would have noticed the cuts on Justin's ankles...
OK, random thought over, LOL!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2019 1:04 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
Now you just have to find a way to take Craig for all he's worth. That will teach him.
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2019 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
Excellent chapter. Really enjoyed Craig's rant and Justin standing up to him. And Brian to the rescue!
Ta
Deb L
Date: Jul 11, 2019 1:16 am Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
With all the shit Craig did, I loved this chapter. What a bigger ass Craig made of himself. We know Justin made the right choice to never go home again.
And Ethan, that fucking weasel. Thought Justin would want him after the shit storm he caused. What a delusional idiot.
Wow, Brian braved the tunnels. Must have heard Craig after he kicked the door in and rushed to the rescue of one brat in need. Not only that but to touch him while he was bleeding. Just wow. What a combo, Justin and those happy pills.
Yep, Just an endangered outweighs OCD and agoraphobia every time! TAG
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2019 12:32 am Title: Chapter 34 - When The Deed Is Done
Absolutely wonderful. It was WooHoo ! LOL Fantastic writing as usual and I was so happy to see a new chapter on Gale's birthday. It just seem appropriate in some way. And, the timing of Brian shaving and Gale shaving was perfect. You two are amazing
Author's Response:
WooHoo! Beards be gone! And more WooHoo! Lol. TAG