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Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 1:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

Thank you for the "spit' warning, LOL!

I really like this very young and very bratty Justin.  Makes a great contrast with the brooding and very OCD Brian.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 1:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

Love the cats name.  I can picture Brian looking as he does now and very OCD.  Now how do you get Justin back inside to get to know him better, after all he knows the cats name.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 4:38 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

Nice reference to "Particules of truth" and Andron look, that I found horrible (the look as I didn't see the film).

What a lonely person; so sad.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

He was just as hairy as I had drawn him with a bushy beard that covered most all of his face and straggled down his neck. The beard was matched by a headful of shaggy, poorly-trimmed, dark brown hair that curled around his face and partially obscured his eyes.   Okay, Do either of you photoshop?  I'd love to see Brian Kinney look like that!

Oh, Justin... You better come back now, you hear?  I LOVED his inner musings this chapter. You wrote it perfectly. Was it confusion from hitting his head? I don't think so. It was just his illustrious host. It sure saddened me with, “FUCK! Even the burglar couldn’t wait to leave. Everyone always leaves. Shit, Bill . . .”  Everyone always leave? Has he had guests before? I take he's a very lonely man. And as your video so kindly pointed out, I don't think WilliamShakespaw is so unwelcome as he likes us to think.

BTW... Awesome video. That was during the days when Michael Jackson looked so divine. And, he always made dancing seem so effortlessly. I was a young 31 when that video was made.

Loved the chapter, and looking forward to the next.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 2:22 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

OMG,  I am so in love with this story.  Your description of the crazy man was perfect.  The two of you together are magic !!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2018 1:05 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Way You Make Me Feel

Of course it was Brian...can't wait to find out why he and Bill are living there. Thanks for the update

Author's Response:

Oh, there's so much fun backstory to come. But never fear, Sunshine is here for him! And Bill The Cat, of course. LOL. TAG

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