[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2019 7:40 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Totally loving it all indeed. Line by line.... From Justin's inner conversation to Brian's amusing smile. The mystery of everything resides in building. I like William Shakespaw too.
I am crazily into this magical story. *happy sighing 💕
Date: Nov 14, 2018 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Okay, which one of you two nutters came up with William Shakespaw? Really?!
You still haven't said why you chose this building, unless it was on social media which I don't use.
Anyway, enjoying this very much, funny AND mysterious!
Thanks
Deb
Date: Nov 12, 2018 1:29 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
I love your bratty Justin! He really gets time to just be young in this. Very curious about what brought Brian to this state though.
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2018 9:01 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Vedy interesting. Makes one want to know more all the sooner.
Date: Nov 11, 2018 7:34 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Oh Christ! As soon as I read about the wobbling dick, I burst out laughing, which wasn't appreciated by my daughter and granddaughter as they were watching a movie. An intense movie. So I shut down my computer and thought I'd wait until they went to bed. When I started reading it again, I again burst out laughing, but knew enough to keep it quieter. Which ever one of you is Justin's voice these last couple of chapters, I really have to hand it to you. So after a few deep breaths, I was able to contunue to read. And then we went to Daphne's logic. (Is this suppose to be a comedy?)
Does Brian by any chance OWN that building? If not, how is it that Justin is breaking in? And the burglar shit is so funny, too. Appears our Mr Peebles had a forbidden love back in the later 1800's.
I think our little Sunshine might have taken a shine to our Mystery Man. Can't wait to learn more about him. Like, how does he get money for food, and how does he Get his food?
Justin, Better ask the Mysery Man his name first the next time.
A slight error:
“Well, if it isn’t the stray bur(g)lar
Loving this story! Keep writing ladies.
Cathy
Author's Response:
Hi Cathy,
Firstly, thank you as always for reviewing, we really appreciate it and we love that you're enjoying this story so much. Is it supposed to be a comedy? Yes and no, it's definitely meant to make you smile with lines like those - so we're glad it made you laugh. But there will be lots of emotions and feelings in this story, so we felt a little humor is needed :)
We both write Justin - what is so great about the two of us writing together is we very much see the same things in the story and our characters, so our writing compliments each other nicely.
Thanks again for reading. We hope you get your answers to your questions soon hehe.
P.S Thanks for the heads up about the error, it's al fixed now!
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 11, 2018 7:02 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
Daphne and Justin: what a pair of friends! I love Justin's distracting ways: I could see the look of Daphne.
Justin found a big clue and didn't break his neck: quite an improvement from his first visit.
Author's Response:
We know right, how proud are you of Justin for not falling down the stairs this time? LOL.
We're glad you are enjoying the Daphne and Justin friendship, she'll be playing a big part in this story so it's important to us that people like her. Justin getting his dick out to distract Daphne was so sneaky, but it seemed just so THEM that we had to do it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~ TAG & Sally
Date: Nov 11, 2018 2:00 am Title: Chapter 4 - Taylor The Latte Boy
I love Justin bratty or not. And, I am totally enjoying every minute of this terrific story.
We also love bratty Justin, he's cute and very in character for the first couple of seasons of the show. We're so happy you're enjoying reading this as much as we are enjoying writing it. Thanks for reviewing. ~ TAG & Sally
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