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Reviewer: Scarletkiss18 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

I am enjoying this story!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 4:00 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

Apparently this Daphne also scored extremely high in verbal while taking her SAT test. I could almost see Justin puff up his chest a little regarding his satisfaction with himself.

Is it weird I thought how Daphne always had food in her mouth, right before Justin voiced that?

I wonder if Bill is trying to protect (Harry) with all that hissing he's doing at Justin. Maybe Justin should invest in some catnip. That should make the cat stop his hissing at him.

(Harry) seems to be keeping a pretty close watch of Justin's comings and goings. I would hope a burglar wasn't too predictable ;)

You ladies were wondering how well we liked Justin's babbling? I do believe I answered that question last chapter. I, for one, LOVE it! Although, maybe we should stick with Daphne's explanation fot today: “Have I told you lately how strange you are?”

One small error:                                                                                                Which, I guess, answered the question of whether or not he wa(y)s gay.

Loving the story. Looking forward to the nxt chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

I think the babbling Brat is the perfect foil to the silent and stoic Egbert,

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2018 2:40 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

I think it is wonderful,  Justin babbling is perfect.  The entire concept of this story is amazing.  It is showing a totally different Brian and Justin and I love it.  Beyond fantastic writing.  You two are a perfect pair!!!!!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 7:03 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

Actually I think Justin's babbling sounds like...Tagsit.  Things are getting better.



Author's Response:

Are you saying *I* babble? I'm shocked you would say such things. Hehehe... TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

Those babblements are epic and made Mysterious Man laugh; so , go for it!

Why am I not surprised that MM is gay?

Please let me know if I'm right regarding the references to "Particles of truth":
-food in §3 “Chicken or fish?” while in the film it was "Turkey or tuna sandwich?"
-the germs' phobia
-the cleaning ritual / OCD
-loner with awful parents



Author's Response:

I'm ashamed to admit that I didn't actually see that movie . . . *I'm a bad fan*. Not sure if Sally did or not. Maybe I should go watch in now, though . . . TAG

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2018 5:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Obsession.

I love this! It's amazing how the characters seem so different from the series and yet not. I love a babbling brat! LOL!

Can't wait to read more, Ladies!

*Hugs*

Deb

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