Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 28, 2018 2:44 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Green Eyes

All I can say, is THANK YOU JUSTIN!  You gave the slimy chin rat the heave-ho. Definitely was LOL, again, (much to my daughter's dismay).

about just how small and useless that piece of fluff between your legs - the one you think qualifies as a penis - really is. Oh My Ever-Loving-God! You got to love Justin, don't you? And I just can't imagine Ethan - Strutting. And where the Hell does Ian get the idea he's such hot stuff, that Justin will come running back to him, begging for his forgiveness? Ethan makes himself sound like some type of god, or something. Gotta wonder what planet he's living on. Besides, Ian, you don't hold a candle to the guy in the Triangle Building.

I love how Justin refers to Egbert as 'His Man'. For knowing him less than a week, he's apparently quite taken.  Which apparently, the non-filter lips, spewed out. And, yes, Egbert's job sounds truly horrifying and boring. I've always wondered who wrote those inane, little user manuals. Some products really do not need anything enclosed. Now I can thank Egbert for them. ;)

xxxxxx

A couple of comments:

“I can see that. What are you working on” (no punctuation at end of sentence.)

(And, although this can work either way, I thought I'd point it out.) “What are you doing in here, Ethan?” I angry (angrily?) whispered.

Great, great chapter. Does Justin really get his way, and is allowed to cook? I suppose it's inevitable, if he uses his impish smile.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^= 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2018 1:51 am Title: Chapter 9 - Green Eyes

Definitely like me some bratty Justin! I love his description of his secret weapon smile and nose scrunch, LOL! I know I wouldn't be able to resist!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2018 4:44 am Title: Chapter 9 - Green Eyes

Wonderful.  Justin is the perfect brat and like it or not Brian is falling for all his bratty charm.  Fantastic.