Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2019 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Spoke Too Soon

Oh Shit...is it Brian to the rescue ? I love this story. Waited too long for this update LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2019 5:33 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Spoke Too Soon

I feel how much you are sorry for the cliffhanger!!! I always want, yearn more from your evil and witty muse's creations.

It's a huge step between tasting a piece of cake and going looking for the persitent stray who seems to be in a very bad situation. How long will Brian wait before going down?

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2019 1:09 am Title: Chapter 18 - Spoke Too Soon

I must say that I got embarrassingly excited when saw this update, LOL! But you'll keep my secret, right?

Surprised that Justin was having second thoughts about the relationship part of the relationship. That's usually Brian's to deal with. 

Looks like Brian will have to come to the rescue of an unconscious Justin in his building yet again. 

Waiting impatiently for the next chapter - no pressure! ;-)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Send A Message

Brian is getting bold with the coffee! And Justin knows how to distract him to diffuse the tension.

Speaking of tension, the scene at the diner was very funny; I imagine Justin being vocal in a gay diner... Did he get more tips?

I loved these quotes:

my twinkie hotness was crammed into a more compact package

She also has a heart the size of an Elephant’s schlong: what a unit to measure something!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 15 - My Secret Place

Hot hot hot this last scene!

The mysterious hidden room: I hope they know how to open the secret door if it's closed by mistake. Justin won't be able to remain quiet too long; he must start looking for answers and well as the other side of the tunnel.

Brian should feel exposed knowing someone could enter the building without him noticing it. It's pretty anxiogenic.

Justin knows how to be bratty and "annoying", yet teasing full force.

Short correction: it's "tete-a-tete" not "tete-a-tet"; with accents, it's "tête-à-tête", which means "face to face".

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2019 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 13 - I Don’t Wanna Go Down To The Basement

Great quote: “If Wikipedia was a person, it would look like you.”

Brian should buy some gloves to help Justin during his "investigations", it should be better than tissues and it should show Justin that he isn't allergic to latex.

Interesting chapter with some historical facts and a mystery that is pending to be solved: they found the cat and the other side of the stairs! Great chapter!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 02, 2019 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 17 - I Send A Message

Entertaining chapter. The emoji message was adorable and I'm sure it fueled Eggy, just as much as he inspired Justin with the pic of the opened condom.

HUGS  ~Cathy

The paragraph that begins with: I spent the next couple... you have Egbert spelled with two g's.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2019 2:05 am Title: Chapter 17 - I Send A Message

Ha! Justin's got it baaaad, LOL! But it seems like Brian isn't too far behind! I'm glad Justin is making him brave enough to want to push his boundaries.

Nice to see an appearance by the rest of the gang. 

Looking forward to discovering more clues in the basement!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2019 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 16 - History Repeating

Okay, thinking about it, no remains will be found. But what about the tunnel passage and the room downstairs with the old fainting couch and wood stove? Could they have used the tunnel to have access to that room, and that's where the lovers met?  Still just thinking of what it all means.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2019 9:50 pm Title: Chapter 16 - History Repeating

Alright, which one of you lovelies came up with: Choked my chicken? Drained the main vein? Jackin’ the Beanstalk? Milking my Monkey?  It's damn good thing I'm home alone. But, I do have both of the dogs attention.  But by the time I got to: “That was maybe my fifth," and using the Magnum XL,  I had tears coming down my face I was laughing so hard.

I see OMT is just as wonderful as he was in canon. I recently came across a story that had Craig all kinds of evil. I need to take Deb's plot bunny, and kill him off. I hate that man.

The mystery in the basement, I think they will find the remains of Jay and his lover, B. I don't think we've learrned who 'B' is yet, though. A relative of Brian's? Anyway, just by going by your summary, that's how I surmise finding the remains in the basement.

Just out of curiosity, I was trying to picture this:  making sure my socks were tucked into my pants - Okay, I can see pants tucked into socks, but I can't see socks tucked into pants. My girls used to pull their socks over their pant leg when they would go ice fishing or deer hunting, so, wouldn't that be pants tucked into socks? (I know, not important, but after reading it three times - well, whatever.)  😊🤔

Can't wait until we get some more clues.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2019 1:09 am Title: Chapter 16 - History Repeating

Wonderful chapter as usual.  I am clueless as to where you are going with the mystery.  Maybe because I don't want to figure it out.  I love your surprises.  The pictures were a terrific addition to the chapter.  Sometimes, I forget to tell you that the pictures add so much.  I get wrapped up in the story and by review time, the pictures have slipped my min.  Sorry.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you like the pics. Some of them were taken by me when I went to visit Pittsburgh last fall for my research tour. I always love pics in stories because it helps me visualize the story. Happy that you feel the same. TAG

Reviewer: Scarletkiss18 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2019 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 - My Secret Place

love this story! can't wait for the next chapter!