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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 7:36 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Dear Diary

It's getting hotter on every chapter and this one is particularly hot! Justin is very imaginative and considerate; double condoms was a genius idea! Brian is getting bolder and more confident.

Great job ladies! And thank you for the entertainment!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2019 11:26 am Title: Chapter 26 - Dear Diary

Yeah, Sally.  Wonderful chapter and of course, the writing is amazing.  You two do have a chemistry to write together.  It must be such fun to bounce ideas around.  Keep at it and I will keep reading.  

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 3:48 am Title: Chapter 25 - Shower

Love this chapter.

A blooming flower is our Brian. Lucky Justin.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 5:53 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Shower

O, this was great.  Love that the boys are getting closer.  Justin just doesn't give up, but really Brian isn't fighting him too much.  Amazing writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Shower

Lust trumps OCD?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2019 8:13 am Title: Chapter 25 - Shower

Brian is getting really bold! Justin is going to enjoy this so much and so will we! And you, writing it!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2019 4:38 am Title: Chapter 24 - Not Your Toy

Marcy hit every one of Brian's nails right on their heads. I do hope she's planning on seeing him again. 

Good old Grandpa. Poor Brian. Well Justin found something's that may actually cheer him up. Who knew they once made penis cages out of tortoise shells. Ha!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 9:45 am Title: Chapter 24 - Not Your Toy

Well, thanks for this very educational chapter and the thorough research you did! So interesting! I bet Justin is going to be willing to read the books with Brian and test some of the positions from the Kama Sutra, if not all of them.

Brian is very receptive to Marcy's ideas; let's hope the meds will help. His grandfather was an awful person; not only did he ruin his childhood, but his young adult years as well.

I loved this "several sizes of butt plugs, ranging from ‘cute’ to ‘ouch’".

Will Justin include these findings in his school project?

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 2:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - Not Your Toy

Wow, this was fantastic.  Got your mojo back full time.  The pictures really added to the writing which as usual was amazing.  Happy Birthday to Sally.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 1:41 am Title: Chapter 24 - Not Your Toy

LOL! Justin's butt plug rating system - from cute to ouch. 

I'm glad Eggy has agreed, albeit reluctantly, to seek some treatment. Lung cancer is a bitch. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2019 12:12 am Title: Chapter 24 - Not Your Toy

Wow.  Those pics sure brought this chapter to life.  Shame he didn't bring some back to try out with Eggy.



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You never know what the future will hold... LOL! TAG

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 23 - History.

Brian was so anixous for them to return that not only did he move the chest of drawers without realizing the dirt on it but he grabbed Justin to him dirt and all.

The kisses are getting hot and heavy. Yay!

Bombarding Brian with both Daphne and Marcy and pizza really wasn't Justin's fault, hopefully Brian will see that. Will he talk at all?

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 22 - How Far We've Come

Wonderful chapter. Stress release cube was a great idea.

Daphne's and Justin's excellent adventure is just beginning. Wherever will it take them?

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 23 - History.

C'mon Daph! Seriously. Eggy & Brat are progressing beautifully. Would really love see Eggy in action with Justin , those *beard burns all over.

Loving their flirt/Conversation and way Brian hugs Justin at tunnel gate. + with all mysteries of Triangle underground Triple S* as Brat described. :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 23 - History.

Justin and Daphne shouldn't push/invade too much or Brian might snap back to his old self.

He seems to be making great steps and now he doesn't hesitate too long before touching Justin; it would be bad to get him reconsider their "relationship".



Author's Response:

I know that all this is happening WAY faster than would ever be possible in the Real World, but since it's fiction, we are happily taking liberties to allow Brian to conquer his OCD really, really fast. Because . . . sex . . . we need it! LOL. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 1:26 am Title: Chapter 23 - History.

Well, Justin was a bit into himself so Brian glaring at him should bring him back to earth.  Hope you find out more about the Secret Society.  

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 12:42 am Title: Chapter 23 - History.

Wonderful chapter.  Poor Brian, Justin is like a tornado that can't be stopped.  Terrific writing.  Hope you both had a nice holiday weekend.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2019 12:22 am Title: Chapter 23 - History.

Great update! I'm with Brian, I hate unnanouced company too, LOL! (But I wouldn't mind the pizza!)

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 7:55 am Title: Chapter 22 - How Far We've Come

Wow!! Love the plot going on. I don't know where this secret door leads but Did it tie some connection Brat & Egbert history too?

Btw I really their Christmas presents (I wish to celebrate too, in near future). Those socks on bookcase. I can just imagine Brian's face.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2019 4:24 am Title: Chapter 21 - Back To You

Beautiful chapter... I feel for Eggy, but really glad Justin is with him. No one should be alone at Christmas. That present is wonderful. Loving their conversation.... & showdown between Shakespaw and Eggy. Hilarious. Trio are Awesome! :) *Hugs !

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2019 2:29 am Title: Chapter 22 - How Far We've Come

I have no idea where that tunnel leads... but I want those magnetic strees balls! I've never seen them in color! :-)

And I am in total agrrement with Justin... let all that "Currier & Ives' snow shit stay in the countryside and out of the city, LOL! 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2019 2:06 am Title: Chapter 22 - How Far We've Come

Wonderful, just wonderful.  Love the Christmas gifts even if it was hard for you to write.  And, the plot is getting even better.    Every time Justin mentions Brian's looks, I see Gale of today with his beard and moustache.  Great idea and the pics and map were terrific.  Need I say, love this story.  Hope Sally is feeling better 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 12, 2019 12:41 am Title: Chapter 22 - How Far We've Come

Darn, so close yet so far.  Where will they end up?

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 08, 2019 2:27 am Title: Chapter 21 - Back To You

Christmas in April was great. It was my mother's favorite holiday, and yes... she did even decorate the bathroom! A matching set of Christmas shower curtain, towels, toothbrush holder and soap dispenser, etc.

Brian made several bigs steps in this one... being outside, accepting the gift without wipes and even drinking the wine! 

Great job!

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2019 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Back To You

I am loving this story, our boys are so different here. Always thrilled when there is an update.

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