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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

good



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Thank you! 

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2018 8:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully written. Haunting and thought provoking.

Thank you for sharing. You captured so much feeling with this short story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words about my writing! And thank you for reading!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 4:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful! Brian is thinking way too much; at least, he is sure that Justin is "it" for him. I hope he tells him that more than once a week.



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It’s hard to turn off his brain after something like this. But this far in the future post series m, Brian and Justin communicate that they love each other, even if it’s not always with words. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 1:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sad and says so much.



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Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

That was amazing!  Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you <3

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 8:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful, just wonderful.  Hope it helped writing it for others to know your feelings. 



Author's Response:

It was incredibly helpful - thank you for allowing me this space 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 6:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Those are some heartbreaking thoughts Brian is having. And that is so true, too. I know he felt quilty for bashing, and in Brian's screwed up way of thinking, the bomb was his fault too. Brian owned the club. He gave permission for the use of his club. And those two reasons, yes, if he didn't know Justin, he wouldn't have to feel quilty.

But what would Brian's life have been like without Justin in it? I can’t imagine living without him.

This was beautifully written. I hope it was cathartic for you.



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was incredibly cathartic. Brian has always felt guilty and he also just has to live with the pain of the memories of not knowing if Justin would life or die, no matter whose fault it was. But despite the pain, it’s always better to have the love. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2018 5:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Regrets yet doesn't.

This was heartbreakingly lovely.



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Thank you thank you!

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