Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2019 11:46 am Title: Chapter 20

I just wanted to talk to Brian... so instead of making himself KNOWN when they came home... he chose to jack-off in the bushes! Yeah... try that line on someone who will believe you!

ONLY A FINE?!?! WOW! The fact that Brian said he watched them have sex, and Michael jerking off watching them... SHOULD have gotten him a YEAR in JAIL... plus a $2,500 fine! We recently had a Peeping Tom guy on the news here... his first offense... and that's what he got!!!

Well, the only thing we can look forward to, is that when his disgusting activities make their rounds in the Avenue... Michael should be treated like the social pariah he is! He can kiss away Babylon, Woody's, and any of the other places no one will want to see him. He will probably have his business go under because no Parent will allow their children to go there!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2019 2:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

Hi Star,

Just wanted to say I have been missing updates from my favourite author.  I hope you're okay and you are well and life and writers block isn't kicking your arse again!

Take care, miss you.

Deb L

 

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 15, 2019 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 20

I miss your updates. 😭

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2019 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 20

Great speech from Deb! If only it could be enough.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2019 7:49 am Title: Chapter 20

Yeah! Michael being treated the way he should be it's a great chapter

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2019 3:13 am Title: Chapter 20

Michael really isn't getting that No One Is Buying His Innocent Boy Next Door Act, they see the truth and and he is left in the cold to fend for himself.

He keeps acting up and this time no one is going to save him or excuse his actions even Deb is not falling for his fake years or little bit excuses, her rose colored glasses have been smashed into dust and she is leaving Michael to figure out how to fix his messed himself.

The restraining order won't stop Michael but it will be very useful when he violates it over and over again.

Thanks for the Update 😃

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2019 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 20

FABULOUS Chapter, StarBaby! I felt exactly like Blake and Deb, while Carl was explaining Michael's nonexistent 'talking to Brian' theory. That Nasty, Dirty Mutha-shut yo' mouth!! Definitely had to employ a variation on a 'Shaft' lyric when thinking about that freaky, sneaky snake in the grass! And EW! EWWWW! EWWWWWWWWWW! <mumbling to myself> Michael is an asexual plant; Michael is an asexual plant; MICHAEL IS AN ASEXUAL PLANT DAMMIT! Ah, my brain feels better now...LOL

I'm so glad they are going to let that little scuzzbucket deal with his own drama now. I'm also happy that he showed his true colors in front of Deb, and she FINALLY isn't buying into the tears and tantrums. Hopefully with the restraining order in place, Brian, Justin and everyone else will finally get some peace.

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle