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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2018 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Fiction We Live

Fantastic story.

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Date: Dec 23, 2018 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 7 - I'm The Best At Ruining My Life aka The Kiss

Like how this chapter went.

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Date: Dec 23, 2018 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 6 - All I Taste Today is, What's Her Name

Brian was smart enough to figure out who did the green marker, is he smart enough to open his heart?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2018 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Every Reason To

Was Justin aware that Ethan was responsible for the green highlighted note?  Green for jealousy?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2018 2:36 am Title: Chapter 4 - Alive Out Of Habit

I guess I'm dense.  Is Brian saying goodbye?

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Date: Dec 23, 2018 12:00 am Title: Chapter 3 - The Second Wrong Makes You Feel Right

Hehe.  He almost punched Mikey.  My favorite part.

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Date: Dec 22, 2018 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The After Dinner Payback

At least he's not hiding what he feels from himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 7:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The After Dinner Payback

Listening to the words.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lilacs & Lolita; Autumn Monologue

Say it with a song.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 2:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - Lilacs & Lolita; Autumn Monologue

hate Ethan

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2018 12:36 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Fiction We Live

This was really beautiful.  Fantastic idea and writing.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 10:19 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Fiction We Live

I like your way of getting them together.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 8 - The Fiction We Live

Great interpretation of a sad period of their lives.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 7 - I'm The Best At Ruining My Life aka The Kiss

I love this moment where Justin is finally fighting back.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 6 - All I Taste Today is, What's Her Name

I love the scent part: it's so true that it's comforting, but the more you hold on to the support of that scent, the more it will be replaced by your own.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Every Reason To

As if the phase wasn't already closed: Ethan needed to do it while it was clear that Justin just did that when he took he belongings and left the key.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Alive Out Of Habit

Subtle change in which way? Up or down?

I hope Brian will demand some peace to Michael.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Second Wrong Makes You Feel Right

At least, Justin left Ethan; that's the positive part.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The After Dinner Payback

Beautiful even if a little OOC.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Lilacs & Lolita; Autumn Monologue

How Justin is going to explain the rose?

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 3:29 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Fiction We Live

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