[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2019 2:11 pm Title: Stars in heaven and on earth [Brian; Gus]
It's rather unfair that Brian has his man, but made sure that Gus doesn't get his girl.
Author's Response:
You're right, but Brian also said that if it's destined for them to be together, he will not object again.
Also, Gus ran right away to look for Dylan. Maybe he needs to grow up a little before actually committing himself.
Thanks for your comment. ^^
Date: Jan 29, 2019 8:46 am Title: Stars in heaven and on earth [Brian; Gus]
Wow wonderful ending I did not see that coming it was a brilliant read thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading my story and for commenting on it. ^^
Date: Jan 29, 2019 2:00 am Title: Stars in heaven and on earth [Brian; Gus]
Think the story was wonderful and you gave us a very good ending. Brian and Justin love each other and are truthful in how they will be. More than can be said for a lot of people. It was wise not to have Gus take Stella to the prom. It could have been a repeat of Brian and Justin with a very bad ending. They are young and Brian was correct in telling Gus if and when they should ever meet again, if it is meant to be it will be. And, Gus is still uncertain of who he is. Great writing. Hope you will write something else for us.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the end.
I would love to let you read my other stories, but I write for work and it is difficult to divide the time between amateur and working writing, imagine finding time to translate!
Maybe sooner or later I will try to translate something else.
Thanks for reading up here and commenting. ♥
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2019 3:41 am Title: The future has distant roots [Gus; Stella]
I wish Brian weren't so cruel. Please let Stella go to the prom.
Author's Response:
Stella will make her choice.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 25, 2019 12:48 am Title: The future has distant roots [Gus; Stella]
Since Stella doesn't know all the facts, she thinks Brian is awful, but we know the pain of the prom. Great chapter. Glad that he and Justin are going away.
Author's Response:
Yes, Stella can not understand Brian's behavior and that's right. Every person has his own pains that others don't know.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 24, 2019 9:19 pm Title: The future has distant roots [Gus; Stella]
Whoa! Brian can be vicious when he is mad. Gus, then Stella!
Good for Gus that Lindsay was here to limit the blow. Stella wasn't that fortunate.
Author's Response:
Yes, Brian can be terrible. :(
Thank you for commenting. ^^
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2019 2:41 pm Title: All the chickens coming home to roost [Paul; Brian]
So Justin chose Brian. Happy, happy.
Author's Response:
Did you have any doubts? ^^
Thank you for commenting.
Date: Jan 22, 2019 2:52 pm Title: All the chickens coming home to roost [Paul; Brian]
Powerful chapter!!! Paul played a card he shouldn't have, but then, who would have? Not Justin and certainly not Brian.
Once it's started, Brian played masterfully, with the risk of Justin going with his proposal.
Author's Response:
Brian risked everything and won.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 21, 2019 11:38 pm Title: All the chickens coming home to roost [Paul; Brian]
Oh this chapter was heartbreaking, but finally Brian told Justin the truth. He wants everything his way and that time is up. I know that Brian will never give him up completely, but will Justin make the choice that needs to be made. Sorry don't like Paul !!!!!!!!!!! Great writing.
Author's Response:
Lol. Poor Paul. ^^ '
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Thank you for commenting.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 12:40 am Title: Crossing Babylon [Gus; Brian]
Great chapter. Brian made a major decision, now it is time for Justin to do the same. At least I sure hope so.
Author's Response:
I think your hopes will be met with the new chapter. ^^
Thank you for commenting.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 9:53 pm Title: Crossing Babylon [Gus; Brian]
So many distractions. Like real life.
Author's Response:
Art imitates life...
Not that mine is art, but... I'm trying! ^^'
Thank you. ^^
Date: Jan 17, 2019 7:27 pm Title: Crossing Babylon [Gus; Brian]
That's a huge step for Brian, letting Aidan go; if Justin goes back to NYC, he won't have his substitute available at quite any time.
Gus seems to start thinking about his gay side and the "what if" about Stella remaining Steve.
Author's Response:
Yes, Brian knows who he really wants.
Gus is young, it's normal that he has doubts and second thoughts... and maybe Brian told him the right things, or maybe Dylan is the right one. ^_-
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2019 2:32 pm Title: Evergreen [Justin; Brian]
Demons. How do you get rid of them?
Author's Response:
:( With the help of someone who loves you and who is next to you.
Fortunately, Brian is not alone.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 14, 2019 8:57 pm Title: Evergreen [Justin; Brian]
At last the boys are in the same room I wonder if they will start talking now as well
Author's Response:
They will talk, don't worry.
But first they have other things to do. ^_-
Thank you for commenting.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 5:55 pm Title: Evergreen [Justin; Brian]
I have always loved Justin, but Daphne is right he cannot have it both ways. Yes, he loves Brian, but if he cannot accept and love Brian as he is then cut the ties and move on. He acts like a spoiled child who wants everything. It isnt't fair to Brian or even to Paul. Your writing is amazing making these feelings seem so real. I am one for a happy Brian & Justin ending, but if Justin cannot commit to just Brian, then best to free Brian from his pain and let him also move onto perhaps someone who will show him he can love him and only him, but please not Michael !!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, Justin has always been a spoiled child who wants everything.
However don't worry, in the end everything will be fine. And lol, don't worry: in this story Michael is happy with Ben.
I wrote other stories where Brian and Michael end up together, but not this one.
Thank you so much for the compliments! It's so strange for me to read my story translated into a foreign language. I do not really know if it is good in English. I was a little worried. ^^
Thank you.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:50 pm Title: Evergreen [Justin; Brian]
Poor Aidan: so close and so far; he must feel bad each time he sees Brian.
Is Justin crying because of Jennifer or because he broke up with Paul? He wouldn't do that by phone.
Author's Response:
You are right. I was sorry to treat Aidan like that. He is a very good guy, but unfortunately Brian is not the right man for him. ^^ '
Justin was worried because Brian was not back yet and it was very very late. Probably he feared Brian had someone else. He had the phone in his hand to call Brian, but he feared he would not answer. (Oh, this is not in the story, but I can tell you ^^).
Thanks for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:27 pm Title: Beyond appearances [Lindsay; Stella]
Oh Justin, your secret won't stay hidden for long now that Lindsay suspects something?
Brian can be really mean to Stella.
Author's Response:
I really do not think so. Lol. Sherlock Lindsay! ^^ '
You're right, Brian is very strict with Stella, but he's more fond to her as he likes to admit. ^^
Date: Jan 14, 2019 4:04 pm Title: How much do the desires count [Lindsay; Brian]
Great discussion between father and son; yet, Brian might be right, but he is trying to get Gus to act like a teen while Gus doesn't want it. Will he follow Brian's advice?
Author's Response:
I think that Gus will have to live his age at some point. After all, he is only 17 years old.
I saw that you also commented on other chapters, so I go on. ^^
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2019 8:24 pm Title: Beyond appearances [Lindsay; Stella]
Brian is being... well Brian. Perhaps Stella will learn, but her suggestion was good.
Author's Response:
^^ I'm happy to have made Brian good.
I only saw the show in translation and I know that some things change with adaptation, so I was not sure if the characters were close to the original ones.
I hope I have done an adequate job anyway.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2019 4:16 pm Title: How much do the desires count [Lindsay; Brian]
At least Brian and Gus seem to be getting along. Mel and Linz's relationship seems to be in a good place.
Author's Response:
Mel and Lindsay are a balanced couple, most of the time.
Brian and Gus are starting to build their relationship.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 08, 2019 6:45 pm Title: How much do the desires count [Lindsay; Brian]
Wow, Brian being a father is amazing. It is true that we do more for our children than for ourselves. Not sure his advice was what Gus wanted to hear, but he did give him options.
Author's Response:
I believe Brian would really be an exceptional father. I would love to see him in a new season.
Gus has just begun to really know him.
Thank you for commenting. ^^
Date: Jan 06, 2019 5:27 am Title: Who fears love [Brian; Michael]
good one, please update
Author's Response:
Thank you. ^^
I've just updated!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2019 2:42 pm Title: Who fears love [Brian; Michael]
First it looks as if Brian is going to be okay with Stella then he complains that he doesn't want Gus to be with Stella. I'm glad he took on the school system but I wish his intentions toward her were better.
Author's Response:
Brian is discovering to appreciate Stella a lot. By attitude she is almost more worthy of him than Gus is. ^^'
But Brian is also a father and worries about his son.
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2019 2:32 pm Title: The Crying game [Debbie; Paul]
I like Deb's attitude toward Stella. I would have liked Justin to be more into Brian rather than Paul.
Author's Response:
Debbie is a super mom! ^^
I wanted to give Paul some space: I figured that many would hate him because he's with Justin, but he's really a good person and I wanted you to know that. ^^'
Date: Jan 04, 2019 4:27 pm Title: Who fears love [Brian; Michael]
Great chapter! Michael is very supportive and doesn't let Brian get away with his usual BS.
Author's Response:
Thank you. ^^