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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2019 11:37 pm Title: Who fears love [Brian; Michael]

Great chapter.  Brian really has grown up even if he can't admit it.



Author's Response:

Thank you. ^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 12:35 pm Title: The Crying game [Debbie; Paul]

Debbie is hilarious: I bet she would have fun looking at porn online!



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm sure! ^^

Think that this scene really happened to a woman I was teaching the basics of the computer. ^^ '

 

Thank you for coming here and reviewing all these chapters. ♥

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 10:02 am Title: Mortgages on the future [Hunter; Brian]

I hope Hunter will keep his mouth shut.



Author's Response:

Lol! I'm afraid yours is a vain hope. ^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 9:38 am Title: The luck of those who struggle [Gus; Michael]

Great chapter and great family.



Author's Response:

Thanks. ^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 8:36 am Title: Calculated risks [Brian; Justin]

I wouldn't be in Justin's shoes: he obviously has an established life with Paul and yet he still goes back to Brian for a few days; is he masochist?



Author's Response:

Maybe a little he is, but above all, Brian is the love of his life, despite everything and everyone.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 6:13 am Title: The children of others [Brian; Debbie]

It seems that Justin has more attaches in NYC than in Britin.



Author's Response:

In a sense it is so, but his love for Brian goes beyond logic and convenience.

Don't worry about them. ^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 5:48 am Title: What we are [Stella; Gus]

What a complicated situation for these kids; what if Gus really loves the male attributes?



Author's Response:

This is the question that started the story, but luckily, Gus is bisexual and it makes no difference to him. ♥

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 4:36 am Title: A matter of choice [Brian; Justin]

Justin is the right person to be the intermediate between Brian and Gus.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is. ^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2018 4:06 am Title: Life is a mess [Justin; Gus]

Whoa! The tension is high! Is Brian aggressive because he is frustrated about his night or actually concerned by Gus.



Author's Response:

Brian is worried. Very worried.

In fact, I would say that his is a kind of paternal 'performance anxiety'.

In addition, he does not want to be judged by a straight son ... and when he finds out about Stella ... well, he will have other reasons to worry.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Fuck relationships [Brian; Stella]

What a weird relationship Brian and Justin have; is Paul the next Ethan? It must be awful for Brian to have to rely on meds to perform in bed.

Gus' girlfriend revelation will be hard on Brian and the munchers.



Author's Response:

Justin is pursuing two relationships at the same time, and both of his partners are aware of it.

They will all know how to react well to Stella's innovation. Well, almost everyone ... ^ _-

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 3:03 pm Title: Shitty surprises [Justin; Gus]

Paul? Who is Paul? Does Justin have a life with him in NYC while he has a life with Brian in West Virginia?

Brian is hard on Gus, but being expelled without a valid explanation is not good in Brian's eyes.



Author's Response:

Wow! You have read a lot and I know that it no longer serves to answer who Paul is. ^^

Brian is a strict but fair father.

^^

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 28, 2018 6:49 am Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

Great beginning! The dinner might be rocky. Did Justin know that Stella was Gus' girlfriend.



Author's Response:

Thank you. ^^

No, Justin did not know, but this is just the beginning.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 2:34 am Title: Mortgages on the future [Hunter; Brian]

Nice to know that Brandon is on Gus side even though he doesn't really know him.  So why is Brandon's boyfriend talking to Brian's bartender?



Author's Response:

Because Liberty Avenue is not very big and if you go to the same places you end up getting to know each other. I wanted to justify Brandon's intrusion into the relationship between Brian and Aidan, the barman, and what could be better than a mutual friendship?

Thanks for your comment. ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2018 3:25 am Title: The luck of those who struggle [Gus; Michael]

I'm surprised that Gus is going to St. James.  Maybe he can switch to go to the same school as Stella?



Author's Response:

I thought about it before choosing which school to send him to.

It's been years since it was Justin's school. Surely the principal has changed in the meantime and if it's still the best school in town, I don't see why Brian should not have sent his son.

This decision will not be without consequences, but you will find out later.

Stella, on the other hand, will go to public school because there is no reason why Brian should pay the fees and then he does not want them to attend. This has not changed.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2018 1:09 am Title: The luck of those who struggle [Gus; Michael]

Read 3 chapters to catch up.  Terrific writing, but truthfully I don't like the Paul situation.  And, Justin not being truthful with Brian bothers me.  Can't wait to se where you go with the story.  I am a happy ending person so I will hope for that.



Author's Response:

Thank you ^///^

The story is now half-finished and I don't want to make spoilers, but I tried to stay true to the style of QaF. I hope I have succeeded.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:47 am Title: Calculated risks [Brian; Justin]

Justin . . . What are you doing? . . . TAG



Author's Response:

He lives his life... ^^'

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:30 am Title: The children of others [Brian; Debbie]

I don’t understand Justin’s thing with this Paul. It’s like he’s living a double life. I wouldn’t think Justin, of all people, would do that. But I guess I’ll have to keep reading till you explain that part... TAG



Author's Response:

In fact, Justin has two parallel lives, but both of his partners are aware of it. He doesn't deceive anyone, except perhaps himself.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 14, 2018 1:29 pm Title: Calculated risks [Brian; Justin]

I'm glad that Brian is being nice to Stella.  Shame that Justin is divided on who he loves.  But I love Murple.  How did Murple get her name?



Author's Response:

It was Paul who chose the name of Murple, he loves the books of Agatha Christie. ^^

Be patient and Justin will make his choice.

Thank you for commenting. ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 9:53 pm Title: The children of others [Brian; Debbie]

Where does this leave the dog?



Author's Response:

Murple is with Paul, in New York.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 1:29 pm Title: What we are [Stella; Gus]

So touching. And so confusing for bth kids. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you. ^^



Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 1:04 pm Title: A matter of choice [Brian; Justin]

Ooooo -  another scientist! You do know the way to my heart, don’t you? Just saying the word ‘epigenetics’ gets me all excited. LOL. TAG



Author's Response:

Lol. ^///^

Unfortunately no, I'm just an editor and an author, but I documented a bit 'before writing.

If I do it for my books,why I should not do it for my fanfictions!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 12:33 pm Title: Fuck relationships [Brian; Stella]

Oooo - the mystery of Stella is solved. It’s great having a story with a trans character. We don’t have a lot in this fandom, and we need it. Good job! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think that QaF would be perfect for dealing with the subject of transsexuality.

I want the sixth season! ç_ç

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 12:09 pm Title: Shitty surprises [Justin; Gus]

Stella seems like an interesting character - very mysterious... TAG



Author's Response:

I hope Stella is a good character.
I love her ^^'

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 9:43 am Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

 I’m finally getting a chance to start this. So far so good. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you. ^^

It is your merit if Lorie has helped me. I'm glad you read it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:20 am Title: What we are [Stella; Gus]

Amazing.  Gus knows.  Kiki knows.  Does Hunter know?  I think Emmett might have a clue, but who knows.  Looking forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

Hunter will find out soon, and that's one of my favorite chapters. Be patient again for some chapters. ^^

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