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Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 2:15 am Title: What we are [Stella; Gus]

Great chapter.  Powerful writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you ^^

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:06 pm Title: What we are [Stella; Gus]

Who is this Brian? I can't believe I'm saying it but I hate him. I didn't think he could be so cruel to Gus or anyone that his son was interested in...is this AU?



Author's Response:

AU? o.O Absolutely not.

Brian knows how to be cruel, I find that he is very "him" at the moment: he is angry because his stupid son was expelled from school for a girl.

A problematic girl, run away from home, who at his eyes appears smart and interested in his money.

In addition, Brian has just discovered that Gus likes males. This makes him euphoric because his son will never be ashamed of having a gay father and will not despise him for it, and Brian can teach him everything he knows. Finally they have something in common, but to be father and son, he thinks that Stella has to disappear. So Gus can really be himself.

Brian is very protective of his son, but he still does not know how to be a father.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 5:02 pm Title: A matter of choice [Brian; Justin]

Brian sounds like Brian.  Justin is more understanding.  Poor Gus, how to explain Stella.  I think he can have it both way, because Stella is Stella.



Author's Response:

Soon someone else will say the same thing you said. Lol.

In a couple of chapters.

Thank you for commenting. ^^

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:44 pm Title: A matter of choice [Brian; Justin]

Great chapter.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! ^///^

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 5:15 pm Title: Life is a mess [Justin; Gus]

Brian is channeling Mikey, accusing Stella of what Mikey accused Justin of being. 



Author's Response:

Brian is now a parent who cares about his son.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 30, 2018 12:31 am Title: Life is a mess [Justin; Gus]

Oh boy.  It is easier being Brian than being a father.  This story is very good and so different from so many Brian/Justin stories.  Hoping for a happy ending, but it may be difficult with all these situations.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and it's pretty original.

Do not worry about the happy ending. It will be. More or less. ^^'

Reviewer: Juditka Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 9:43 am Title: Fuck relationships [Brian; Stella]

This is a very tricky chapter. Paul asked Justin to get married. Stella is actually Steve.No alcohol, smoking, drugs! Sex with only medicine. Brian's sick? So far I like the story. I hope Justin remains with Brian.



Author's Response:

Don't worry: Brian is not sick.

He is taking the "blue pill" and his doctor does not want him to take risks. Brian is 47 years old in this story and the doctor wants him to quit with excesses, or he could have a heart attack. ^^ '

Trust: everything will work out for the best.

Reviewer: momlitmonster Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 6:29 am Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

Why is Brian being such a hard ass with Gus. I hope he snaps out of it soon. I love where you are going with this regarding Stella and I love that Kiki was there for her. I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting! ^^

I'm glad you're enjoying my story, and I hope you'll continue to like it.

See you soon. ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 27, 2018 3:17 am Title: Fuck relationships [Brian; Stella]

Definately interesting.  Loving it.



Author's Response:

Thank you ^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2018 8:34 pm Title: Shitty surprises [Justin; Gus]

Looks like most of the family is siding with Gus and Stella.  Not so sure about Brian.  Who is Paul?



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian is a  tough guy.

You'll soon know about Paul. ^^

Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 9:40 pm Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.  Gus getting expelled?  I'm thinking it was for the right reason and Brian would be proud of his son for sticking to his principles.



Author's Response:

You'll find out very soon! ^^

Thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 8:39 pm Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

Really great start. Very different. 



Author's Response:

Thanks ^^

I hope you continue to like it.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2018 7:26 pm Title: See you in Pittsburgh [Brian; Stella]

Welcome to KD! We are so excited to have you posting here. I look forward to being able to read your creation. Ciao! TAG



Author's Response:

♥ Thanks ^^

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