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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2020 1:31 pm Title: Explaining

Lindsay seems to have turned around.  What is with the wigs?

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Date: Feb 18, 2020 3:12 am Title: The Blame Game...And Someone is Happy!

Love how much Baggie cares.  Also how you got Michael to confess.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 1:42 am Title: The Blame Game...And Someone is Happy!

Oh this was great.  I just knew Brian couldn't be dead, but it serves Michael right to think he is.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 1:22 am Title: The Blame Game...And Someone is Happy!

That Was Evil and Cruel!

Genius Idea and it worked to get them to.turn on each other pretty quickly I do hope that was recorded?

So glad Brian is okay but no one will be happier than Baggie who is going to make sure Brian is well looked after Justin better be prepared to Say this turn to get near Brian for awhile lol

By morning Nancy and Michael will be ready to blame the other for the world being flat at least in their minds and Asses 😂😂

Thanks For the Update so needed the laughs😀

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2020 11:31 pm Title: The Blame Game...And Someone is Happy!

thanks for update

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2020 11:07 pm Title: The Blame Game...And Someone is Happy!

Lordy I had a heart attack. Brian dead. Girl, you are a genius writer. Loved it.🥰

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2020 1:16 am Title: The Sickening

Clifhanger.  Ugh.  Love them hate them.  Great story.  Wonderful writing as always.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2020 6:49 pm Title: The Sickening

Michael and Nancy deserve whatever Hell is heading there way they could've killed Brian but they don't care cause they just wanted payback, hope they enjoy the payback heading their way cause this time they won't be charged with fraud or theft but attempted murder.

David is working hard in Florida getting his needs met by as many men as possible before he has to come home to the Old Crone residing in his bed.

Boy Won't Be Be Euro when is fun is interrupted due to Nancy getting arrested and that she cleaned out his bank account.

About time Michael learned the leverage he had over Slick never really existed at all night can go back to being forgotten and knowing he never stood a chance with Matthias.

Is Lindsay really changing or looking for a new angle??

Thanks For the Update 😃 

Well Worth The Wait😀😀

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2020 1:43 pm Title: The Sickening

How cruel.  I knew Michael was bad news but this!  At least they won't get away with it.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2020 1:41 pm Title: The Sickening

thanks for update

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2019 12:52 am Title: The Duchess and The Queen Their Moves...

Great update.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2019 4:06 pm Title: The Duchess and The Queen Their Moves...

Possesion & In Power. The way these Idiots are being dealt with is brilliant!! Kudos to Your fantastic writing. ❤

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2019 7:17 pm Title: The Duchess and The Queen Their Moves...

This Is So Good!

Lynette has her power back and is showing Nancy and her son...I mean husband(😜) that she is not a scared teenager anymore, the tiger is coming of Lynette and she is probably getting ready to claw some flesh to bone just waiting for the right time to sharpen her nails😆

Nancy moves pretty fast for a old woman😆😆

So now that Lynette has dropped the Daddy secret what will Nancy be doing now without her Ace Card?

Cause we all know she was holding that for a rainy day to use to get more money out of George.

The Nasty Bratty Three have to work over the weekend now what horrendous disgusting thing should they have to do to make up for the hours they wasted?

Perhaps the chef should be sick it will be funny having Nancy use her hands for more than flashing her jewelry and or dismissing or the help, Lindsay taking orders again should be almost nostalgic for her and Michael.

David thinking his car has been destroyed should make for some interesting conversations between him and Nancy for this evening and the next few days😂

Their new mode of transportation will everyone in the neighborhood so envious when they see I hope it has a distinctive horn too so  no one misses it😇

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2019 1:16 pm Title: The Duchess and The Queen Their Moves...

Oh dear.  The car, the key and the dog, oh my.  Do they actually end up working?  Would love to see Lindsay without makeup.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2019 5:34 am Title: Arrested and More Developments

Did David really think he could his way with them. Those dreams though *shudders.

Glad, Lynette is with people who cares. Thankyou for update.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2019 5:22 am Title: Living Up to His Rep...His Vagarious One

".... the one you Birthed." Thats the Brian we love. Great! No backing down.

Michel deserves to Eat the Shi**ts he spouts without ever thinking about others feeling.

I gladly don't like him though. In Qaf, He is just too much manuplative & momma child.

 

 

Sending, Hugs. :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2019 4:40 pm Title: Arrested and More Developments

Great update.  Glad that Lynette has a different father.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2019 3:06 am Title: Arrested and More Developments

My, my, my.  It gets more interesting with each chapter.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2019 7:07 pm Title: Arrested and More Developments

Oh Shit!!! Nancy's secret is out in the open now and she has no leverage to use against George or Ron now.

I bet she was keeping Lynette's lineage in her back pocket to use later and now that has been taken away like all her other dreams.

I do hope w heard that juicy tidbit about George, Lynette and Ron that will certainly fry her ass knowing that Lynette stands to inherit even more millions from her natural father as well as Ron.

And that George and Ron are willingly sharing fatherhood of Lynette and both couldn't be Happier with the new dynamic of their lives.

Three men are helping Lynette heal the wounds she suffer along with great friends she will never go through that kind of pain again.

David helping Michael, Lindsay and Nancy is beyond stupid but that stupidity will hopefully lead to the biggest downfall he has ever felt and will never recover from.

David fantasizing about Brian and Justin is all kinds of icky but it will never happen he should just enjoy the fun he has between the sheets with Nancy cause that is the only hole his puny dick will be filling in the foreseeable future lol

Not surprised The Diner has become popular the food there is excellent too bad some of the service won't be but they will have some time to learn.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2019 2:55 am Title: Living Up to His Rep...His Vagarious One

Oh this is getting better and better.  Terrific writing

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 7:21 pm Title: Living Up to His Rep...His Vagarious One

Cruelty to an Animal should be a nice sentence for Michael and the fine should be hefty.

Having to stay in his diaper for hours should be fun experience for Michael should be never actually grew up.

Lindsay and Nancy had to remove their make up?!

The Horror The Horror!!!

They probably make the grotesque portrait of Dorian Gray look Hot!

Justin does know how to do a payback, that was Masterful!

So Deb has her ring back huh, Michael should start sweating and shaking.

Nancy and Lindsay will so enjoy being ordered about by Deb and serving good to who they considered peons.

Perhaps David should have Nancy use her new skills at home heaven knows she could use the practice.

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 4:48 pm Title: Living Up to His Rep...His Vagarious One

Michael is such an embarrasment.  He deserves everything you give him to do.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2019 4:28 pm Title: Living Up to His Rep...His Vagarious One

Love it, thanks for update

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Date: Nov 04, 2019 5:04 am Title: Twinkle Shines Bright and Brian Turns His Beam On

Yes!I would like hug Brian & You. Just like Justin I love Brian blunt honest personality.

Michel & Lindsy wanted everyone to cater their arses, Now they had to do it with Nancy. Wonderful chapter. Not even being served a spoon michel , maybe lyndsy too be thrown out fast.  *gleeful

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2019 5:55 pm Title: Twinkle Shines Bright and Brian Turns His Beam On

Oh Shit, They Are In Trouble Now!!

Brian is not going to be nice, gracious or understanding he will be vicious but not in the way they think,you can destroy someone but not rising to their bait which Michael and Lindsay will try to use, plus ignoring them while also forcing them to do every menial tasks will have them acting out more.

Plus since they are helping with the party prep I would make sure they are watched like a hawk for sabotage and then let them go to the party all dressed up as guest then make them serve as wait staff for Emmett and employees of Liberty Diner 😜

Every time they are disrespectful to any of the patrons or other staff members another day should be added on.

Nancy will finally learn how to cook while Lindsay and Michael will finally learn how to clean properly, they will at last understand what an honest day of work is like, especially when Nancy has to fill orders for a busy diner, Nancy moping floors would be a sight I know Lynette and Ron will enjoy recording it photographing for her mugshot I mean scrap book, plus every broken dish, glass or bent silverware should be added on to their bill.

Wonder if Gus and Jenny will come by for lunch with Justin?

Perhaps Lindsay and Nancy will finally get some fashion sense too Lord knows they could use the help, especially with manners and class which they sorely lack despite their way of thinking.

Twinkle remembered enough to help Casper get justice and will make what Slick did seem sweet cause Casper like all the others should take it all including the crumbs.

Wonder what or who David will be spending time with while the little woman is working off her debt and the house is Free of old lady smells?

I doubt he isn't getting his needs met somewhere when he doesn't have to service Nancy or plotting with Michael and Lindsay?

Does Lunch Time Grease Go With Diamonds and Silk?? rofl

This Is Going To Be Good!!

 

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