Date: Mar 05, 2019 1:30 pm Title: Being Taught a Lesson...David and Being Played...Michael
Cliffhanger. Love them. Makes the wait for another chapter even more interesting. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Hiya, thanks for the review, but I forgot to correct the end before I posted it, so you might want to read the end again for the next chapter to make sense.
MissMerlot.
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 8:21 pm Title: Some Bad Things Come in Threes Too!
That is a relief (joy) to know Annabee is not his. Lindsay can't be trusted. Hope they found the father.
David wanting to bed Justin. Yupp, Brian is so gonna kick his sour ass*.
Em and Brian checking their watches see time Justin has Annebee. Aww that's funny & Cute.â¤
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 6:21 pm Title: Some Bad Things Come in Threes Too!
How evil. But if Michael isn't the dad, how will his trying to get her back work?
[Report This]Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:32 pm Title: Some Bad Things Come in Threes Too!
Oh Yes!!
Annabee is free of Michael and Lindsay not her godfathers though lol
I wonder who Lindsay spread her for before Michael climbed in between in New York? That was an ugly thought!
I do hope that conversation was recorded and that David enjoys being rammed hard without lube because siding with Michael and Lindsay will cost him more than he could ever imagined?
Danny being an honorary grandfather to Annabee is wonderful :)
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:28 pm Title: Some Bad Things Come in Threes Too!
David is going to be nasty, but his nemesis can be worse.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:16 pm Title: Who's In Charge Again?
Great chapter.
Well, it is so hot in here. Brian & Justin certainly gonna take more lessons from Lionel.
David's badluck with Peterson cohoots.
poor Mikey?! ...nope, he deserve it all, whatever will come his way.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 8:02 pm Title: Kicking Back
*in Emmett voice "Great! I adore these smackdowns. Thanks!"
Micheal was certainly born with pea brain. Where he next visit going to be? Will Micheal ever learn? No, i know. In no time he will be, where he belongs....in Bubba's arm at prison.
"Unfortunately he is ours".....Hilarious Deb.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:14 pm Title: Kicking Back
Daphne against Michael: always a great entertainment!
Date: Feb 19, 2019 5:03 pm Title: Who's In Charge Again?
I send all my wishes to David, just because we can't let the poor guy dealing with his dear wifey on his own.
Date: Feb 19, 2019 1:54 am Title: Kicking Back
Great two chapters. Oh that Mikey just never learns. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:31 pm Title: Kicking Back
There aren't going to be enough rulers in the world to deal with David, Nancy, Michael and Lindsay but using them is better than beating the idiots who will use it to bleed everyone dry.
Nancy is Despicable she is married to the man who raped her daughter but she wouldn't care because he has money and standing.
I feel for Lynette having to see that man and her mother but the best revenge is to not let them see they have an effect on you, so that when you beat them they are the ones who are falling apart while you are cool and comfortable.
New game for Michael whenever he starts whining, screeching Brian is his best friend everyone who years it goes Oh Snap and puts five or ten dollars in a jar by the time he goes back to jail there should be a fortune for some charity.
Or when Lindsay flicks her hair, turns on the waterworks or does that competing routine everyone should say Yatzee and put the same amount in a jar for her too.
Twenty if she and Michael say it together lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:16 pm Title: Who's In Charge Again?
Uh Oh Michael is going to wish he stayed in prison after Matthias finished with him. (Can't Wait!!)
Hope David likes dust on his dick Nancy must have collected a hand full by now it will it be frostbite he should t afraid of?
Brian and Justin are going to learn a lot from Lionel so much in fact they might have to do something nice to thank him.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 4:14 pm Title: Kicking Back
Oh my. This keeps getting better and better.
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2019 4:08 pm Title: Who's In Charge Again?
Such fun. I can't help but cringe thinking about David and Nancy doing the nasty.
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2019 5:16 am Title: Daddy's Home...And Is Daddy Home?
Gus and Jenny are all grown up. Now what will Michael get into.
Date: Feb 06, 2019 1:00 am Title: Daddy's Home...And Is Daddy Home?
Great update. Love when Michael and Lindsay are miserable.
Date: Feb 06, 2019 1:00 am Title: Daddy's Home...And Is Daddy Home?
Great update. Love when Michael and Lindsay are miserable.
Date: Feb 05, 2019 7:20 pm Title: Daddy's Home...And Is Daddy Home?
good one, cant wait for update
Date: Feb 05, 2019 7:13 pm Title: Daddy's Home...And Is Daddy Home?
Powerful! Gus is very angry against Miss Peterson and so is Jenny.
How Lindsay is going to manage her life with her mother and David? Will she bargain her stay in exchange for keeping the kinky details from Meathook or will it be too difficult for her to deal with them?
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 8:10 pm Title: ...This Is How We Did It and She Says It
Yeah if Annabeth had been Brian's no prison cell would've stopped Lindsay from going to Brian to cry, shout and force Brian to pay for that baby and exert her authority over everyone like she did with Gus.
Facing Michael should be interesting but I fear that Wannabe Wasp whispering in his ear of course with both of them being on parole their actions should be Beyond Stupid and yet Interesting cause they will fail again lol
Brian and Justin even get married in an interesting way their lives will never be boring!!
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jan 24, 2019 4:31 pm Title: ...This Is How We Did It and She Says It
Justin is a king in the queening department! What a scene!
I bet Lindsey will have a hard time not coming after her daughter. Do they think that Michael could be the father?
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:24 pm Title: ...This Is How We Did It and She Says It
I really would like to know your thought processes when you write. How do you keep each story straight? Marvelous chapters each and every one.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:44 pm Title: So That's What You Know...
Oh yes it will piss Lindsay off that Slick and Lindon are raising her child that she will try any trick she can to get her child back or be apart of that child's/Brian's life.
Nancy is going to Shit a Brick when she finds out her rich young stud prefers dick and not cobwebs full twat to get off.
Ronald will love hearing how mighty the fall Nancy and Lindsay are having lol
Wait until everyone finds out who the father is and how Lindsay will use that to try to get her way along with Michael.
Love that Gus accepts Annabeth as his sister without hesitation.
Mel and Brian should make sure all samples are destroyed just to make sure Lindsay doesn't try to go that route.
Thanks for the Update:)
Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:19 pm Title: So That's What You Know...
Hmmm....I don’t know how to feel about this chapter. I’m really hoping Brian is not the father because I would feel awful if he had to give up his rights and pretend Annabeth isn’t his daughter.
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:31 pm Title: So That's What You Know...
Cliffhanger !!!! Love them. Makes the story so much more interesting. Great chapter and writing.