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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2021 9:40 pm Title: The Trial, A Revelation and Her Revenge

And baby makes... (I  forget the total as the family is huge!) Poor Ted is going to be a very, very nervous man. 'CALLING FOR THE VALIUM!!!'

Old Vancie boy is problem wishing he'd walked more of a straight path in life about now.

I'm looking forward to what's in store for Lindsay! Will she flip like Michael and meet the same fate? Then the two can commiserate together in Hell. (I bet you don't know where I got that idea - huh??? LOL

Hugs,

Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2020 4:38 am Title: The Trial, A Revelation and Her Revenge

Great chapter.  So the baby is finally going to arrive.  Glad Vance is getting the most punishment possible.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 22, 2020 3:47 am Title: The Trial, A Revelation and Her Revenge

Oh my.  Poor Ted is going to have conniptions if Mel doesn't get to the hospital in time.

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2020 2:53 am Title: The Trial, A Revelation and Her Revenge

I love all your stories, but this is up there. I envy your imagination. Great writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 20, 2020 2:45 am Title: The Trial, A Revelation and Her Revenge

Looks like the baby isn't waiting for Mel to decide they are coming and Ted will be in the room or they will have to call in armed guards to keep him out.

Vance should've left and never looked back, but alas when a fool plays in the world of grown ups he must learn that the punishment was never going to be childish.

Brian and Justin facing their regrets and coming out stronger for not letting it weigh them down us Great, they are moving past the years of pain and towards a better future with them standing by each other and facing enemies and obstacles together.

Lindsay is about to learn that she should've accepted defeat and moved on because now she will pay more than she ever realized before.

Thanks for the Update😀

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