Vance Is Beyond Stupid!
But He Is Lucky That Vest Went Off In The House!
I want to try everything they were talking about then go back for seconds lol
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Ah ah, Cody is making a comeback. What a nut-job this guy. The only thing I liked during this period was the hot scene on the chair when Justin came back and was on fire. His short hair was hot and the way Brian was touching it was endearing, if this term can be used for Brian.
Another great chapter. Love that Vance is finally getting what he deserves. Terrific writing.
Oh, Very good. Vance hung by his own petard!
Oh My Goodness!!
Vance Is Beyond Stupid!!
Thank Goodness For That Though Because If He Had Shot Zee He Would Be Dead By Now!!
Nice to sed that this family is well trained to handle anything including a stupid idiot with the brain pan of a stick.
Once they get Vance back in prison where he belongs that only leaves Lindsay to deal with now that should be fun and quick.
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Hehe. Vance has a problem.
Really liked this chapter. The cliffhanger.....not so much!
Yippee! You have internet! Gosh, I remember the month I was moving, I about went nuts. I bet you're happy!
Lindsay, Lindsay... ah, I feel so sorry for her - NOT - she's broke and penniless, plus it sounds like she has to come up with some more money. Wherever will she lay her head when she gets out of there? She should be grateful for where she is... she and mumsie have three hots and a cot.
Ooh, I just thought of something... she wanted to keep her head low while in the slammer, but with this new development, she will probably go on a rampage, and into whose path, and what toes will she step on? Maybe there are fun times ahead.
So, is Zee NOT really pregnant? That was a show they put on? And if Gardner thinks he has her - I have to wonder if it was dark enough, maybe it wasn't really her - But all hell will break loose when he gets in that house with his 'victim'. That guy's mind is totally warped.
Are you getting towards the end of this?
Great chapter. Never did like Vance. Wonderful writing.
What on earth is Gardner up to?
Lindsay is so good at digging holes for others she forgot there is always two for herself she is completely destitute had quite the arrest record growing and I seriously doubt if Nancy has any money left once she leaves prison she will be in the mood to take care of her grown needy daughter?
Every time Lindsay tries playing clever it ends up slapping her in the face hard and stomping her flat Ass lol
I so hope Vance doesn't have See and isn't at the real house because they will rip him apart before the bomb goes off which wouldn't be such a bad thing for them but why have that creep's blood on their hands?
Luther is really very good and he is going to be a wonderful advocate for other prisoners in and out of prison.
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Ooo-kkaayy... Can I just say that Gardner is one sick motha? Eeewww... It's bad enough reading about Lindsay being with him... but the thought of him with Justin...
I NEED BRAIN BLEACH!!!!!!! They should have him arrested for coming on their property and defacing it... poisoning it... because the plants will probably refuse to grow...
But, I'm anxious to find out what Brian's plan is... possibly set Gardner up for rape?
Very interesting development: sure thing that Brian and Justin are very teasing, and then also taunting for jealous people.
So, I was wrong about Vance having the personal effects...
Now, you've brought in that little creep Cody... yuck! I have to wonder hpow much of a problem he might become...
And for some reason, I think you're going to bring in another 'watcher' besides Michael... more intrigue that way... BUT... if they suspect it might be Michael, and if it turns out to NOT be him, I'd think it would have to be someone close in stature and size, for them to think Michael in the first place...
This is so good... lots going on...
Two WASPS have now had the ultimate sting... and once it's found out Vance has Saps personal effects, it'll just be a matter of time.
Am I missing anyone?
Whoa, whoa, whoa, Vancie boy likes little Justin!!! What a twist... if I can't have him, nobody can... why does that remind me of Michael and Lindsay... another delusiona brain.
Vance might have thought killing Sapperstein and his lawyer (at least I think he might have had a hand with the lawyer, unless it was purely because of prison) might have been smart, but for some reason, I think it's going to bring him more trouble... which I sincerely hope so.
Well, Lindsay is getting a little payback for the havoc she has sown, but I'm still going to look forward to what might befall her in coming chapters... the fact she's trying to regroup and set a new plan in motion, well, I'm kind of hoping it will be Brian, front and center, bringing her down... Kill that delusional mind once and for all.
One thing that really grabbed my attention, is the ending: The question is, what is he going to do when he directs his anger at the right person?
So, who's the right person? If we go from the original source, that would be Lindsay, for upsetting Hobbs, Sr. in the first place...
You better sleep with one eye open, missy...
Well, I'm kind of getting caught up...
I have to admit this was a classic chapter and the first time I've read something like this!!!!!... I do wonder if that's the last we've seen of widdle Mikey, or of we will get to live through some of his hellish hell... Couldn't happen to a nice guy... GO YOU!!!!
I do hope you have really good plans for that other delusional Miss Prissy... (that's saying it nicely.)
Well, I'm really enjoying this!
Great chapter. The twist with Vance is something so different. Fantastic writing.
Vance is going to get both barrels right between the eyes and still there will be more coming his way.
Put her really is a good man who will make a a good advocate for prisoners rights he will make a good father aswell because but has come a long way in his quest to make amends.
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I can't wait to see what you have planned.
Terrific chapter. As always wonderful writing.
Gardner is riding close to the edge. His time is coming.
Oh this is getting good. Never thought of Vance that way so it is a great storyline. Wonderful writing.