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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 8:04 pm Title: So Here's What Happened...and The End?

Will Stark dare ask one of his kids to give a kidney?

What "P-word" stands for? President as in POTUS?



Author's Response:

Yes indeed it does and of course he will and they will agree - but not for the reasons that he thinks...

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 6:41 pm Title: So Here's What Happened...and The End?

If course Brian would win he wouldn't back down from a fight or a bet lol

Of course Zee might need to learn pacing or Faal might need lessons in tackling from Drew?

so Luther is seriously ill wonder if he will apologize or try to get his last digs in?

Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 4:07 pm Title: So Here's What Happened...and The End?

In my world, you told us about the Thailand episode just for me and it's my Christmas gift! delusions delusions but hey, um having a pure Novotney Peterson moment and enjoying it! Merry Christmas if you celebrate it!



Author's Response:

Hello there, no delusions whatsoever, I did do that because you asked so nicely. Glad you are enjoying it, hope you enjoy the rest.

Have a fabulous New Year.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 3:42 pm Title: So Here's What Happened...and The End?

Interesting.  It jumps around but I love where you go.  Can't wait to see what you've planned next.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 15, 2018 12:32 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

you should tell us the thailand/woody's part in details plz plz plz!!!!!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 12, 2018 1:52 am Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Before I get to the story, I just want to say, whoever made the new banners for this story and 'Smoke and Mirrors', did a FANTASTIC job. They are the most beautiful banners I have EVER saw. 

I was a little worried when I first started reading, thinking, "Nooooo, Faal, you can't go there", and I felt something was wrong with this scenario. Then I thought, okay, maybe this is a setup, and he plans to abandon Lindsay on the island. Then the knowledge of her being slapped with the news that Zee is actually still a part of Faal's life, and Lindsay was actually there for servitude, had me smiling and chuckling.

I loved the little smackdown Ronald's wife gave Nancy at the beginning. Her almighty thought of cheating on Ronald, got her what she deserved.

But Michael pairing with Stockwell?  Look out world! Are him and Stockwell in prison together? This is another story I am going to have to go back and look through, because I'm a little muddled on the why's and how's of prison, and how long they are sentenced for. And is Brian's position as Councillor, actually the Mayor?

Waiting for more of this. Already loving it.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^= 

Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 11:53 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

YES!!!  They are back. I could just kiss you. Thanks for making my night. Best early Christmas gift ever!

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 6:00 am Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Great! Its finally here!

I was worried at first but the smackdown came later was Awesome by them. Still dreaming Linds really? , accept it you can never be Zee. One trouble taken care of. Its time to pay your debts Lindsay dear. Enjoyed Brian & Justin romance. Councillor BTK .

What is moron Micheal and Stockwall is brewing? Plus sinister Luther is upto? Better watch out. Brian and Faal are very protective of Justin and Zee and their lovely family.

Excited to read MORE. Kudos for your writing. Best of luck!! 🍀

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 2:57 am Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Great chapter, glad for another part to this story. Love it!! Great Lindz smack down!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 6:54 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

It was a Brilliant Plan because Lindsay would be too busy daydreaming and acting all superior to notice that she got played lol

Lindsay will so enjoy catering to others high demands instead of being catered to <giggles> plus being on a tropical island sounds Wonderful especially with dishpan hands

Who did Ronald marry?

And since Marcel doesn't have as much as Ronald I hope he is an Amazing Lay?

So how long before Nancy comes to visit Lindsay?

Brian is a Councillor?

Too bad no one stopped Lindsay's email and Michael didn't get internet.

Great Start :)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 6:41 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

Great to see that the team is back. I was surprised to read that Faal got Lindsay out of the USA; good trick! She fell right into the trap. I could only imagine how she will manage having people like her bossing her around in such a paradise.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:43 pm Title: Get Rid of One Trouble...

A very interesting start.  At first I thought it was just a dream, but it seems that you have many an interesting plan.

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