[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2020 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 27
Love the tattoo design. Love the happy ending. It made my legal-Eagle heart happy. TAG
PS. For a sequel, you could flesh out the sperm donor story. Explain how Sapperstein was selling his slaves' sperm, under the table of course, to sperm banks and maybe even turn up some more kids for Brian. Then they could fight the legal battle to stop that practice too! Yay!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your feedback on this story :) I am glad that you liked it!
I have to admit that as of now there are no plans for a sequel. I'm focusing on other stories right now and my muse is way too happy with those story ideas.
For the moment, this universe is done :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2020 9:16 pm Title: Chapter 26
The lawyers save the day! Hoorah! TAG
Date: Aug 23, 2020 5:27 am Title: Chapter 19
All this discussion about court challenges makes my nerdy lawyer heart pitter-patter. Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
Haha, I hope it won't disappoint because I have to admit that I am not a lawyer, I am not American and have no idea about American law... *lol* Long live fanfiction where you can make the world the way you want it to be ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 20, 2020 8:25 am Title: Chapter 12
So I take it, in your story, the child of a slave doesn't automatically become a slave himself? TAG
Author's Response:
Exactly, Gus wouldn't automatically become a slave himself. Which in this case is good as nobody was even aware that his father/the sperm donor in question was a slave... Could you imagine living a normal life with your parents and then you find out that your sperm donor is/was a slave and become a slave yourself? The horror... I couldn't do that to Gus and everyone else involved. I am not that evil ;) So no, in my story he'll be safe!
Date: Aug 19, 2020 7:31 am Title: Chapter 10
Somehow I don't think that living in the bubble is going to be enough... TAG
Date: Aug 17, 2020 6:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I'd somehow missed that this one was completed. Yay! But I'm gonna have to start over from the beginning. TAG
Author's Response:
I hope you will enjoy it. It's not an easy read, but I hope it will be worth it in the end :)
Date: Jul 12, 2019 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I'd pretty much guessed what you were hinting at, that Sap had prob sold Brains sperm for extra profit as a bad guy/sleezeball should!
Thanks for the reply, looking forward to your next story!
Ta
Deb L
Date: Jul 01, 2019 4:15 pm Title: Chapter 27
Loved it.. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad that you liked this story and gave it a try :)
Thanks for your comments - I really appreciate them!
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2019 4:52 am Title: Chapter 27
Well, what can I say? Really loved this story and followed every installment. Very well written.
Not sure if you never intended to explain about Gus or just decided you couldn't find a reasonable explanation/plotline for it! Oh well, as Justin would say, it's a mystery!
Thanks,
Deb L.
Author's Response:
Awwww, Deb, thanks for your comment!
I am glad that you liked this story and that you gave it a chance :)
Yes, the Gus thing was always supposed to be a mystery for Brian and the girls, from the moment it came up. When Melanie couldn't get any further with the sperm bank where they had gotten the sperm from, it was always supposed to stay a mystery. In my head, I know what happened and yes, it is a reasonable explanation (really, there aren't that many possibilities), but I don't like when writers spell everything out into the last tiny detail. I love when readers can use their own imagination and can use their own ideas to fill some blanks. Lets just say that my explanation involves the SAP and some more evil from his side.
As for the characters in the story: Sometimes we just have to accept fate and count our blessings. Gus is a good thing that happened to Brian at a time when not many good things came his way and he has learned to be grateful about having his son in his life. Anything else isn't as important as the fact that he has Gus.
Thanks for reading this story and giving it a chance :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2019 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
Absolutely wonderful ending to an amazing story. The difficult reading made us realize how lucky we are to live the lives that we do. Your writing is truly wonderful. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Hope you are thinking of something new for us.
Author's Response:
Awwww, thank you :)
I am glad that you liked the ending and the story!
I am actually writing on another story now, so there will be something else coming soon :)
Thanks for reading and for your comments - I really appreciate it!
Date: Jun 24, 2019 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 26
Celebrate! TAG
Author's Response:
They most definitely did :)
More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2019 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful, just wonderful. So happy that they won. I am a sucker for happy endings. I know they have a way to go to complete everything, but the Supreme Court ruling was what they needed. Fantastic writing.
Author's Response:
Everyone loves happy endings, right? Right? I certainly do :)
I am glad you liked this chapter and their win.
More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 19, 2019 8:48 am Title: Chapter 25
More please. TAG
Author's Response:
More will be up soon :)
Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2019 1:47 am Title: Chapter 25
Oh, can't wait for the hearing. Hoping for a happy ending. Love this story and your wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
I think by now we're all waiting for a happy ending. Poor Brian would definitely deserve it after all he has been through.
Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :)
Date: Jun 12, 2019 12:13 am Title: Chapter 24
Glad we can just skip forward over all those years during the court cases... TAG
Author's Response:
Haha, I am not sure I am glad about that, but since I am neither a lawyer nor a judge and don't work in the justice system, lets just say it was the easiest way to move forward ;)
Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2019 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 23
Wow, that was painful... TAG
Author's Response:
It was painful to write as well. Poor Brian :(
Hopefully there will be better times ahead for these two!
Thanks for your comment!
Date: Jun 11, 2019 3:08 pm Title: Chapter 22
Nice job describing the start of what will be a huge legal case... TAG
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it :) And yes, it will be a huge case.
Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: Jun 09, 2019 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. Figured it would go this way, but hoping for a better ending. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
We can all only hope for a better ending - those two would really deserve it after all they have been through :)
More will be up soon! Thanks for your comment!
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2019 2:48 am Title: Chapter 23
Wow, powerful chapter, but happy that everyone is supporting Brian and Justin. And, now the trial will begin and the ugliness will continue. Terrific writing,
Author's Response:
I am glad that you liked the chapter :)
Of course everyone is supporting them, how could they not? They really are a bunch of good friends and family in the truest sense of the word!
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2019 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Know it is going to be tough, but Brian is tough and with his own personal pit bull, Melanie on his side, they will be strong. Hoping for a happy ending at some point.
Author's Response:
I love happy endings as much as anyone else, so there is hope ;)
And Brian would really deserve for this to work out after everything he has been through!
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)
Date: May 25, 2019 7:25 am Title: Chapter 21
Yay! Exciting decision! TAG
Author's Response:
Exciting and scary at the same time. We can only cross our fingers for Brian and hope that it will work out in the end.
Thanks for your comment. More will be up soon :)
Date: May 25, 2019 3:38 am Title: Chapter 20
I’m with Justin - Brian needs to be selfish this once and just go for it... TAG
Author's Response:
Yes, he really needs to think about himself in this situation. We can only hope he'll come to the right decision in the end.
Thanks for your comment :)
Date: May 18, 2019 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter. Now the fight will start, but I just know that Brian will win. Terrific writing.
Author's Response:
Yes, now the fight will start and we can only cross our fingers for Brian. He would definitely deserve his freedom!
Thanks for your comment, more will be up soon :)