Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2019 6:18 am Title: Chapter 3

 I can see how this is going to be really hard for Brian to adjust to... TAG

Author's Response:

Yes, it will be - poor Brian has really been through a lot in recent years :( 

More will be up soon! 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh Happy Day! I was a little worried with the way the chapter was going, but you worked it out for us. I fully understand Brian's attutude though, There is no way, after what he has been through for 4 1/2 years, that he would have any trust left in him. For evem to trust Justin, to him, meant disappointment. But thankfully, Justin finally got through to him.

I read your last response to my review, and I STILL have to stand by my choice to beat the shit out f Craig and RUN! If he had gotten out of Pittsburgh, and farther, he might not have been caught. But you said something about it being worse for him if he had been caught? Well, what could have been worse than what he had suffered for 4 1/2 years by those sick bastards? They could have strung him up and mutilated him, but he wouldn't have been much of a pleasure slave anymore. And the pain would have been a one-time thing. The way it was, he suffered many years, many times. Nope, beat that Craig to an inch of his life. I know I sound - whatever - but it probably doesn't help matters that I was looking at old fics on MW last night from 2008/2009, and found one about the catholic church and Craig Taylor was one of the priests, and yes, Brian and Justin, were under his watch. (I think you can guess the story from there.) I only got the gist of it, by reading comments. Not sure yet if I could stomach it. Needless to say, Craig Taylor is on my shit list right now. Hmmm... I think I might have to write a one-shot where something evil befalls Craig, just to get it out of my system.

I did catch where Justin told Brian that in the loft, they were Brian and Justin. I would suppose if they were in public, Brian would have to hold tight to the obedience of a slave n his masters presence.

Loving this story, and can't wait for Sundays now.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Yes, poor Brian :( Those last years have really messed with him. Poor guy... 

There will be more details that will be made known over the course of the story that might explain a bit more why running away would not have been that easy for Brian. And with how they already treat slaves on a normal day, I wouldn't even want to imagine what they would do to a slave that had tried to escape. And it was already mentioned that some slaves would die and nobody would care... I still would not have run ;) 

In public things will be very different as there are certain rules and expectations of society that they would have to follow, no matter how much they might hate it.

More will be up soon :)