Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2019 9:17 am Title: Chapter 4

Wow, Wow, WOW!!  The emotions were on overdrive in this chapter. Granted, as hot as the sex was, it was done with so very much emotion and love, it overtook the actual act.

My heart wrenches every time Brian has a memory of those years. Men using and abusing him for their sick acts. Gotta wonder how often Brian even managed to come. I can only hope the sick fu*ker's used condoms.

And yes, what an overwhelming knowledge that must be for him, to finally have and know that someone LOVES and CARES for him. Worries about him and wants what is best for him. Like I said, so very much emotion in this chapter.

I almost did a double take when I read:  He had finally come home after years of having been lost. The very first ever story I wrote, which is posted somewhere, (and soon will be here, too, and I do a little bit of rewrite) two sentences I wrote was:  You may have gotten lost for a little while, but I waited for you to find your way home. Now you have and I know you won't get lost again." Great minds must think alike, huh?

I hope you didn't think I abandoned your story. I know I missed reading last weeks chapter, (because here I am, now) but since I entered the writing challenge on MW, I have been researching and writing, plus trying to catch a chapter here and there. I'm taking your sentiments to heart, and finally believing that running might not have been best for Brian. Justin will do his best to help erase those years, and maybe towards the end, Brian's four years of hell will be a distant memory. YOU, my friend, can make it so.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Awwww, I am glad that you liked the chapter and the sex that the boys had :) As you said, it was about so much more than just the actual act.

Yeah, Brian is still working on coming to terms with how much his life has changed in recent days since Justin has bought him. After what he has been through, who can blame him?

That is funny that you used the 'coming home' reference as well in one of your stories. To be fair, I think it's a fairly popular statement, but I totally agree on the great minds and all ;)

Oh don't worry, I know how RL goes and how we can all get busy at times. I am currently on a 3 week long business trip and basically just uploaded the last two chapters while sitting in airport lounges. Sometimes there just isn't any time. I know and get that, so don't worry if you miss a week or something. I won't hold it against you ;)

Thanks for your comment and more will be up soon :)

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 21, 2019 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for not making us wait.  The anticipation is great, but waiting too long is frustrating.  Glad they love each other.  Terrific writing.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I decided I would be nice for a change ;) This story is gonna be hard enough on all of us even with them having sex ...

I am glad you enjoyed it!

More will be up soon!