[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 3:16 pm Title: Justin
Well we meet Lindsay and Mel while they are in Toronto in the first chapter and then find out that Justin was in Cali with two new characters and with Ethan who needs to be tied up and put in boiling water. This meeting of Brian and Justin is so different. Jewel and Pearl are totally new and add to the story.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 4:18 am Title: Justin
I have started this story four times. The other three times, as soon as I got to: “Because he broke them. Ethan broke your hands.” I was sickened-shaking- and had a lump in my throat and started to cry. Tonight, I decided I WAS going to read this, and started at: Three Days Later.
Remember when I told you I HATE Ethan, and to PLEASE have their time together very short? Okay, I was very serious, but, Mother of God! He broke all his fingers in his right hand??? Christ! I hope Ethan gets time for assault! You Do Not Break Artists' fingers! A baseball bat, no less. Gotta wonder the way Justin winced at the sound of it, if he was bashed when he was younger in this story.
Well, we know he didn't previously know Brian, but he did sound familiar - WHY? I wondered a bit about Brian's statement that he was six when it first happened to him, then realized he was talking about his father. But, WHY does Brian want him to come and live with him?
We don't know what business Brian is in, as he's opening a restaurant. We don't know where Jen lives, and we don't know where Brian lives, but it's going to take another hour, at least, to get from Jen's to Brian's. How does Brian know Jen and Pearl? If Jewel is Justin's best friend, and yet Pearl's mom, just how old ARE these people? And my everlasting gratitute to Pearl for taking the bat to Ethan's car and violin. I hope the violin was smashed to bits, and the car is beyond repair.
Now that Brian has entered the scene, and he's bringing Justin to live with him, (is he NOT the STUD?) I'm in for the long haul. Thank you for this new story,
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:43 pm Title: Justin
Loving the story so far. Can't wait for next update
Date: Jan 16, 2019 1:07 pm Title: Justin
Good lord. Ethan's a lunatic (nothing new) and takes it out on Justin. A crusader for the abused swoops in to save him. Love it.
Did anyone break the fucking fiddler's fingers or do worse in retaliation? I mean like maybe he lost a hand at the wrist or something?
Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:40 pm Title: Justin
Very disturbing and intriguing! I don't remember seeing "AU" in the tags. How is it that Justin and Brian don't seem to have a past together? Or is Justin amnesic? He seems to remember Ethan though.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2019 3:18 pm Title: Justin
Wow. New characters! I can believe Ethan is so evil. Did he get arrested? Like how Brian takes over. Can't wait to see where you go next.
Date: Jan 15, 2019 11:12 am Title: Justin
Wow, this is great. Love this story and can't wait for more. Wonderful writing and a different way of getting our boys together.
Date: Jan 15, 2019 10:35 am Title: Justin
OKay that's it! I've read all your stories [and they are all great] and I can tell this is your best [read greatest] by far! so drop everything and let's get this show on the road!