[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2019 4:48 pm Title: The Three Bees
This chapter was enlightening. Michael is as nasty as ever, using Brian's loft without permission and thinking that it's okay. He and Lindsay are two of a kind. Mel has mellowed and giving Brian back his rights was the right thing to do. Now we find out that Brandon and Brian are twins. It's a good thing they didn't trick. I like Ben and the fact that he's Hunter's father is a bonus. Ben, Brandon and Brian the three B's.
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:41 pm Title: The Three Bees
Oh Lordy, Nicole. You out-and-out slayed me here. I'm starting to think this is going to be my favorite story of yours. It is already too good to be true!!!
Michael is a no good, slimy rat bastard, lying, cheating philanderer, who deserves everything he's about to be handed. But I shudder thinking of him as a top, Just seems to me, that he would fumble his way through it. And Deb's House??? I can see Deb going ballistic if she discovers that!!! I'd love to know where Michael gets all his money to do all this traveling with. Because, if Ben was financing, that well is about to dry up! (Please let that be the case!) Leave Michael's sorry ass poor and destitute, his store close to financial ruin.
More secrets are revealed. Michael and Lindsay's blatant disregard for Brian by using his loft deserved a hell of a lot more than, let's not talk for a while! But, haha, no more keys, you Judas'. I do wonder if Lindsay was using the loft for little sexcapades too. Everyone saw straight through their: "We have been making sure that nothing untoward happens…” for what it was! YES!!!!
Ben being Hunter's real dad, is like manna from heaven. But I have to wonder why the secrecy, which I'm sure you will reveal in due time. Again, tag-checking. I saw no HIV tag, so I'm assuming Ben is clean. Any chance of Ben and Brandon?
As soon as Brandon stared at Brian and said,“It's the eyes and the smile,” I was fairly certain they were brothers. At first I was a little confused, but after reading it a few times, I think I got it. Brian and Brandon were adopted by Jack and Joan. Brandon was taken by his adoptive mother, Joan, and leaving the home. But, Brian was left behind with his abusive, adoptive, scumbag of a father, Jack. Is that correct? Do we learn why were they given up for adoption, or won't that hold any bearing to this story?
But, OH PLEASE - Give us front row seats when Ben confronts Michael - kicking him out of his house, telling Michael he's living at the loft, and that Hunter's his son, and ESPECIALLY that Brandon and Brian are BROTHERS!!! Oh Happy Day!!! I have to wonder if maybe Michael didn't like or approve of Hunter and that's why Ben decided to keep that little secret to himself. Gotta wonder where widdle Mikey will lay his head at night, because once Debbie and Vic know the truth, I doubt he will be welcomed in their home/homes.
I realized as soon as I left my last review stating we don't know what business Brian is in, was a complete error. Your story started with Gus and Brian, in Brian's office, at Kinnetik. Silly me. I think the whole Ethan debacle had me forgetting everything I previously read regarding this story. But then this chapter verified that, as well. Still doesn't explain Brian opening a restaurant, though.
One last thing, good to know Justin is well on the mend, that bones have healed almost perfectly, and no lingering after effects other than a little weakness. All due to the tough taskmaster that Brian is, and also that the nightmares are slowly receding. But, still wondering how Brian knew about Justin and why he was adamant on helping him recover. WHY JUSTIN??? There are so very many abuse cases out there. What's Michael and Lindsay's views on Justin staying at Britin? Or, don't they know? I think Gus will be good for Justin.
Yes - DEFINITELY my FAVORITE of yours!!!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:52 am Title: The Three Bees
Secret sons, secret brothers, secret lovérs, kept secrets. The plot thickens.
So so good and juicy. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Jenny at Britain. Ha! No entitlement there.
Ben and Brandon oh yeah.
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:03 am Title: The Three Bees
Oh wow, great ideas. My only question is what idiot would want Michael ???? Love how this story is going with lots of twists and turns. Wonderful writing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 7:19 pm Title: The Three Bees
Was Lindsay also cheat ing in the loft or was she just there snooping looking for any dirt she can to get her way?
Brian and Brandon being related is going to set Michael off of course not as much as finding out Hunter is Ben's son and everyone finding out Michael is a Low Class Do It with the morals of a filthy napkin.
Deb will be soon please to hear Michael is using her home for his Low Rent Version of Brian hope his tricks enjoys the humiliation along with Michael?
Brian making sure Justin does his exercises and helping him recover will do them both good.
Ben staying in the loft will certainly chaf Michael and Lindsay's flat Asses just like knowing their access to Brian's money is off limits too along with his home.
Mel should stop wasting her breath and show Lindsay the outside of the door she isn't going to stop trying to be Mrs. Brian Kinney and the kids need a stable environment.
Thanks for the Update :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 4:27 pm Title: The Three Bees
This answers some questions and brings up more. Will enjoy learning more with each chapter.
Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:59 pm Title: The Three Bees
What a juicy chapter!!!
The beginning is painful with Michael and Lindsay demanding a room for Jenny at Britin, then the loft they use when they need it, without asking.
Ben and Hunter: that would be a bad one for Michael.
Brian and Brandon: that could make a hit on Liberty Avenue, if they decided to chase together.