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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2019 3:22 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

WOW!!! Jam packed chapter!!! Not sure where I should start. I guess the main thing we kind of learned a little about Brian's secret. He's the one I've been wondering about. The shock of the word 'bite' must have brought the memory flooding his brain that he fell and hit his head. Jack the Bastard strikes again. It's a good thing Brian didn't kill him, but at the same time, too bad he didn't. I'm just glad Michael wasn't witness to that scene. The little chicken spit must have made a hasty exit when the commotion started.

Michael... I can't believe it was Ethan he was having an affair with. How did that work exactly when Ethan lived in California, and Michael lived in Pittsburgh? or were Justin and Ethan living in Pittsburgh and his show was in California? (I'm a little confused there.) If they lived in Pittsburgh, how did they not know anybody on the Avenue?

Anyway, it goes to show how really stupid Michael is... if Ethan escaped from his boyfriend beating him up... yes, how is it that Ethan didn't have a mark on him? And I hope Michael realizes he called Justin a: hopped up lunatic! Michael also better realize that Ethan was sleeping with other men... Thus Michael getting anal warts. OH, OH, OH... If Ethan has chlamydia, or whatever the STD he had, and the surrogate got that sperm inseminated... would that result in problems to the mother or baby? I'm not well versed on that subject. WOW!!! Not sure about the baby... but it CAN'T be good for the mother!

Yay! B/J went home together. Justin, Brian needs some TLC when you get home! And when Brian ran away... it indeed led him to his real mother.

HUGS  ~Cathy

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2019 3:16 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Okay, Brian's ex-dad was Jack?  Michael was fooling around with Ethan, blaaah.  Did Ethan give Mikey warts?  So much to learn.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2019 4:33 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

I love the "silly old trout" even though it's almost insulting to the trouts out there.

I'm lost for the rest: I still don't understand what was funny in what Jenny said to Michael. Who gave "love bites" to Justin (I think it was him the recipient). I'm not sure about what happened to Brian at the end of the chapter. I guess my brain is not correctly wired or too tired.



Author's Response:

Hiya,

It was deliberately a bit bit confusing, hope the next chapter has cleared up the confusion.

Happy reading.

MissMerlot.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2019 9:06 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Always can count on you to keep matter interesting. Fantastic writting.!!

Ethan & Micheal. Idiots should not get away that easily hurting Justin so does Lindsay. Hope Jewel, Jenny, Pearl throw her whiny a** on bed of pins (atleast burn seeing Brian living with Justin in BriTin already). Keep it up Dad Ted.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2019 4:24 am Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Loving this story, but I seem to be missing some secrets.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2019 7:11 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

OOkaay.  Totally confused by this chapter, hope it clears up soon.

Keep putting out the good stuff hun!

Ta

Debs L



Author's Response:

Hey, the confusion was slightly deliberate, this next chapters deal with people really talking, some getting closer and others further apart.

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2019 6:10 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Old Trout! That is the perfect name for Lindsay cause that is the face she makes when her plans fall apart and she is trying to come up with a convincing lie lol

So Michael intercepted or write the letters?

What A Maroon!!

Whatever they come up with to make Michael suffer should be funny and very clever.

Thanks For the Update 😃

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2019 4:44 pm Title: Teddybear and More About Brian

Great chapter.  Another twist to the plot.  Love it.  Terrific writing.

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