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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2019 5:51 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Well, well, well... It looks like Lynette had an ace up her sleeve! Lindsay has officially lost Brian, Mel, Gus, Jenny, Lynette, and Gregory. Oh! She has Michael!!! I guess the question of the hour is if, when Brian WOULD trick, did he stay at Babylon, or did he bring anyone back to the loft? If Lindsay had planned on using the sperm for herself, all is lost to her, if Brian never brought anyone back to the loft! And remembering the conversation when it was disclosed about them using the loft... it didn't sound like Brian had used it in a long time. But now, Lynette about to reveal everything to Brian and Justin. I also wonder what Lynette will have up her sleeve in regards to getting her money back from Lindsay. I can't figure out why Lynette was giving her money when she was aware that Lindsay was sleeping with her husband.

Yes, B/J are already HOT!! And poor Michael... he who laughs first and all that! “He doesn’t do relationships, he fucks and has done, onto the next one!” Haha, Michael... he's already in a relationship!

I'm looking forward to see what you have up your sleeve regarding Michael's father. Because... Divina or Danny Devore is not listed on your cast of characters! And Deb gave nothing away!

HUGS ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Hi Cathy,

Lindsay as is her want doesn't think she's lost or been bested by anyone, they are just sulking and will come around. As for the loft there is more to come on that and there is how Michael and Ethan actually met in the first place. With regards to Lynette and the money, in the first chapter when Mel found out that Lindsay had told Brian that nobody was hiring and he was giving her extra support money, Mel gave him his rights back and he stopped the support money. So she went to Lynette for it. And Lynette didn't know about her sleeping with Gregory until he told her the day he left her, it started when they came back to Pittsburgh.

Ah yes the Daddy of Michael...he's going to be a character to say the least, apples and trees and all that!

Happy reading and hugs,

Nicole

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 5:18 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Love it.. Thank you



Author's Response:

Hey, so glad you are liking this, more secrets...and of course hotness...will out.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2019 5:53 am Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Lynette is almost as conniving as her sister.

This is my favorite quote of this great chapter: “Condom goes on dick. Dick goes up ass. Thrust a few times. Cum and done.”. It's so Brian!

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:58 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Lindsay info hope you didn't take more than you have in your accounts because Lynette does not seem like the person to.take your word that you are broke.

Michael is a moron but since he suddenly wants to meet his Daddy then hopefully he will meet a person more selfish and entitled than him and they can harp at each other until the end of time!

Lynette may be devious but she has more heart than Lindsay by coming to.see Brian and preparing to tell him the truth she is continuing to severe the hold Lindsay had her on.

Ron Would Be Proud.

Brian and Justin are so Sweet and Hot, Very Hot Together and they will only get Hotter.

Might need everyone to keep Brian and Brandon from killing Lindsay.

Did Lynette use the samples?

Does she have a surrogate pregnant by Brian?

Is Lindsay ready for the hurricane coming her way?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:24 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Think it took my rating away again. so here it is.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 5:23 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

Great update.  Terrific writing. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 4:50 pm Title: Dealing and Dispensing With

We start with Lynette and end with Lynette.

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