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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2024 8:39 am Title: Their Final Secrets Opens A New Chapter

Love that the foot guys found happiness, love and a strong family and that the bad guys got what they deserve by losing more the they will ever gain.

 

Brian and Justin getting married their way is just so them but they got to celebrate a blessing with their family is !such better.

 

The way Michael spends money he will be broke before the year is out and that couldn't happen to a bigger jerk lol

Thanks For The Story I Enjoyed It Immensely and Can't Wait To Read It All Over Again?????

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2024 1:52 pm Title: The Jewels of Their Crown become Their Gilded Cages

Want to get revenge on idiots who enjoy flicking pain on others to go their own self worth?

Beat them at their own game by turning the table on them first.

 

By the time they all figure out they have been got they will be beyond broke lol

This day really knows how to get revenge with style and grace while also keeping their own hands clean.

Bravo!!

Thanks For The Update????

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2024 1:33 pm Title: Striking Back and the Apple Cart Gets Tossed

Michael has five million dollars and still can't buy class or a Brain lol

Thank Goodness Hunter Is A Genius and Michael is so Predictable!

Brian and Justin getting wedding tattoos is so Cute!!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2024 1:07 pm Title: Perfectly Played

Michael got played and he gave them the way go do it, it was a very clever plan so I guess Michael deserves a Thank You for getting himself out of their lives for good.

Brian and Justin are going to have an Amazing Wedding now that the trolls are gone.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2024 12:30 pm Title: Being Her Finally Costs Her Dear...

Lindsay playing fast and loose with the truth? 

I am Utterly Shocked!!!!

That three million won't last a year because Lindsay has expensive taste and a need to be the center of attention so that means she will want to flaunt herself as bigger than she actually is.

Matthew isn't great going to try to make a lady out of Lindsay?

Once a Lyinging Whore, Always A Lying Whore!!!

And no one has ever been able to turn a whore into a respectable lady.

Michael will definitely be coming for them he is another person who adores attention.

 

Reviewer: Galesgal Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 18, 2023 3:30 pm Title: Mel

wait a  minute did i misread that?   Is Brian the father of JR?  OMG and this story is still going?   OMG



Author's Response:

Hey there, Ted is JR's father and yes this story is still ongoing - life is lifing but I am getting back into writing.

Thanks

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2023 12:58 pm Title: Death Knells

Lindsay always thinks she is so clever and Always looks so stupid after her plans don't work out to her advantage. 

Talk about walking out if the frying pan into the fire while trying to look slick and falling on your face at the same time.

Michael is going to come after Lindsay right after he comes looking for everyone else and she will have to deal with that brat along with his Daddy.

Oh Joy!!!

Soon everyone will be Free except for the three people who deserve each other.

That Makes Since!!

Thanks For The Update

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2023 12:45 pm Title: Being Shown One Ugly Truth Exposes Another

Thanks For The Update!!

Reviewer: TwoLeggedTripod Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2023 5:28 am Title: Being Shown One Ugly Truth Exposes Another

I love to read your updates!

Reviewer: lili33680 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2022 10:47 am Title: The Perks of Being a Backroom Boy and a Patient Dad

Merci pour cette mise à jour.

J'adore toujours quand tu fais passer Mickaël comme un idiot.

Continue à écrire quand tu as un style et des idées vraiment géniales.

Reviewer: Maxsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2022 5:11 am Title: Getting out of Jail...and Getting to Know Ems

Just threw up in my mouth….the thought of Mikey with…well, anybody!

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2022 3:54 am Title: So You Think You Know Your Enemy

Ugh, Michael. He's so stupid sometimes. He needs to remember "What goes around, comes around."

And since Ohio is the closest place to get gas, he better be serious about moving. Because it won't pay to drive three hours one way to get gas. By the time he drives there and drives back, he'll need to turn around and go back for some more gas! Nincompoop,

Aren't you my father? A little too late, but somebody needs to deal with Michael with some tough love. If he'd had that growing up, he wouldn't be so awful now.

And if he were smart, (but he's not) he better think twice before going after Justin. Brian will be ready to kill him, and there's a whole slew of people to help him get rid of the body.

Thanks for the update,

Cathy

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2022 10:39 am Title: So You Think You Know Your Enemy

I do.as I like, but it's not my fault Michael Novotny. Never changes, never will.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 27, 2022 9:01 am Title: So You Think You Know Your Enemy

Brian and Justin really do love each and that love is strong enough to withstand fools who think they are Superior.

Michael can't get spit on on Liberty Avenue lol

Michael refuses to see his hand in his own destruction and no matter what he will continue to blame others for his own stupidity.

Can't Fix Stupid, But You Can Laugh At It!!

Thanks for the Update????

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2022 6:00 am Title: Ringing in the Changes Causes Shock and Ha-Penis

What a yummy chapter in more ways than one.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2022 11:55 pm Title: Ringing in the Changes Causes Shock and Ha-Penis

It's good everythng worked okay with Brian and Justin.

Mikey, Mikey... what portion of a working brain does he have?

Cathy

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2022 11:09 am Title: Ringing in the Changes Causes Shock and Ha-Penis

So love this. Keep on putting it to Michael and Lindsey. Glad BJ settled differences.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2022 8:21 am Title: Ringing in the Changes Causes Shock and Ha-Penis

Michael always did have the innate ability to screw himself over without anyone else really even trying lol

This Family really is getting Larger!

Brian and Justin are too cute and they need to learn to communicate better.

Thanks For the Update????

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2022 3:07 pm Title: Unfriendly Fire and Assistance

Thanks for all the updates.

Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2022 12:36 pm Title: Unfriendly Fire and Assistance

Darn, I wanted to know the secret.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 30, 2021 2:48 pm Title: Unfriendly Fire and Assistance

I think I'm losing the plot on this story.  I think I may have to read it all the way through at the end instead.  I'm thinking there shouldn't be much left?

It's too much to keep all your stories plots in my head at one time.  I've not read 'The Piano' yet for that reason.

Thanks for the updates.  Is 'The Call' being updated soon too?

Still love your writing.

Happy New Year!

Deb L.



Author's Response:

Hey Debs, 

Hope you're well and had a good Christmas.

Oh tell me about it, I get muddled myself! You're right, this should be wrapping up in a few more chapters - two more chapters of The Call are being posted this weekend, hopefully.

Thanks for still loving my stuff.

Fabulous 2022 to you too!

Nicole xx

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2021 12:42 pm Title: Unfriendly Fire and Assistance

Sneaky people. Hehehe. Great story. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2021 9:44 am Title: Unfriendly Fire and Assistance

Michael is an idiot and his turn is coming Joan is beyond stupid and she played perfectly in their hands like the sullen, hateful drunk she is.

Brian really should've let Justin be there for him and now he knows never to deny himself his safe haven again.

Thanks For The Update????

Happy New Year????

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2021 5:04 am Title: A Mother Knows Her Child and a Friend Becomes an Enemy

So Lindsay has tossed Mikey aside and he doesn't know?

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2021 5:38 pm Title: A Mother Knows Her Child and a Friend Becomes an Enemy

Getting just what they deserve with hopefully more to be dished our again until there is nothing left

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