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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:22 pm Title: The Reunification in Germany and Therapy

Warty Boy is a Good Name For Michael of I prefer Pissant Nobody Better lol

Justin going to therapy with Brian and moving into the house will be good for both of them, they need to help each other heal inside so it can reflect the outside too.

Michael is about to learn you don't piss off these twins or this family, it's a lesson Lindsay should seriously heed because once Brian finds out about this baby she won't have anywhere to hide it anyone to protect her or Lynette.

Can't Wait!!
Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:03 pm Title: The Reunification in Germany and Therapy

plz moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!!1

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2019 4:58 pm Title: The Reunification in Germany and Therapy

Yeah, here is Daphne!

Glad to see that Michael can't get in Babylon for free anymore. He will find out how fast a nasty rumor can go through the gay grapevine.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2019 5:29 am Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover

Brothers! That's intresting.

Things usually get flew over Micheal's head. Even in Qaf series, Micheal never learn when to shut up ...And How to shut up.

We don't need to picture them nasty as Micheal & Lindsay truly are from within core... Nasty persons.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:58 pm Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover

Lindsey might be in for a big surprise! Is the kid for Lynette?

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 7:00 pm Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover

Read both chapters.  Wow, that was a big surprise that Brian, Brandon and Mikey are all at least 1/2 brothers.  Great storyline.  Fantastic idea and writing.  Can't wait to see what you have planned for all of them

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:20 pm Title: Mother, Lovers and Brothers

Ha ha ha, the last sentence!!!

As for the rest: amazing, surprising and f***ing great!!! Deb will spend days/weeks realizing what she just discovered.

I bet Lindsay and Michael will try to get a copy of the key. At least, Michael could try by getting the one from Deb for a short time.

I'm speechless regarding what Lindsay did for Gus; he must be so mad at her.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:03 pm Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover

Lindsay You Bitch!!!

Brandon and Brian will destroy you if your sister uses that stolen sperm to have a baby of course now that I think about it I hope she already did it because wouldn't it be funny if it was Michael's baby instead <evil grin> or his lover's??

Ben shouldn't feel bad about losing Michael he was no great Love just a small itch that has now been scratched and he can find someone who makes his world sparkle like fireworks.

 

 

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 5:47 pm Title: Mother, Lovers and Brothers

Ewwwww!!! Michael is so Scuzzy but obviously Paris was so worth a cause now he has a present that sounds like it will be giving for quite sometime lol

Brian and Brandon are Deb and Carl's kids?

Wowwwww!!!!!

So now Michael can stop fantasizing about his half brother <shudders> cause now it really is never going to happen lmao

Lindsay is really bringing her Bitch

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 4:54 pm Title: Hello Mother...Hello Father...Goodbye Lover

Not surprised that Michael is stupid.  Ben's well out of it.  Lindsay now has problems.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 4:43 pm Title: Mother, Lovers and Brothers

Now that was interesting.  So Brian and Mikey are half-brothers.  How perfect.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2019 5:30 am Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper

Interesting, but I think I need notes on who is related to whom.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 11:54 am Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper

Great chapter.  Such a different storyline and I love it

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2019 11:54 am Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper

Great chapter.  Such a different storyline and I love it

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:14 pm Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper

Very interesting and intriguing, but I'm lost: I will need to read once more from the start.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Feb 05, 2019 5:50 pm Title: Emmett, The Crash, The Bushel and The Hamper

Michael doesn't deserve to know who Hunter actually is to Ben he is a self-absorbed A-HOLE who really shouldn't have a child because he is more nothing more than a drop in dad who's callous disregard for anyone's feelings beyond his own should have a dump truck rammed up his flat Ass might improve his posture lol

I take it Lindsay interfered in Gus having a relationship before?

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:41 pm Title: The Three Bees

Oh Lordy, Nicole. You out-and-out slayed me here. I'm starting to think this is going to be my favorite story of yours. It is already too good to be true!!!

Michael is a no good, slimy rat bastard, lying, cheating philanderer, who deserves everything he's about to be handed. But I shudder thinking of him as a top, Just seems to me, that he would fumble his way through it. And Deb's House??? I can see Deb going ballistic if she discovers that!!!  I'd love to know where Michael gets all his money to do all this traveling with. Because, if Ben was financing, that well is about to dry up! (Please let that be the case!)  Leave Michael's sorry ass poor and destitute, his store close to financial ruin.

More secrets are revealed. Michael and Lindsay's blatant disregard for Brian by using his loft deserved a hell of a lot more than, let's not talk for a while! But, haha, no more keys, you Judas'. I do wonder if Lindsay was using the loft for little sexcapades too. Everyone saw straight through their: "We have been making sure that nothing untoward happens…”  for what it was!  YES!!!!

Ben being Hunter's real dad, is like manna from heaven. But I have to wonder why the secrecy, which I'm sure you will reveal in due time. Again, tag-checking. I saw no HIV tag, so I'm assuming Ben is clean.  Any chance of Ben and Brandon?

As soon as Brandon stared at Brian and said,“It's the eyes and the smile,” I was fairly certain they were brothers. At first I was a little confused, but after reading it a few times, I think  I got it. Brian and Brandon were adopted by Jack and Joan.  Brandon was taken by his adoptive mother, Joan, and leaving the home. But, Brian was left behind with his abusive, adoptive, scumbag of a father, Jack. Is that correct? Do we learn why were they given up for adoption, or won't that hold any bearing to this story?

But, OH PLEASE - Give us front row seats when Ben confronts Michael - kicking him out of his house, telling Michael he's living at the loft, and that Hunter's his son, and ESPECIALLY that Brandon and Brian are  BROTHERS!!!  Oh Happy Day!!! I have to wonder if maybe Michael didn't like or approve of Hunter and that's why Ben decided to keep that little secret to himself. Gotta wonder where widdle Mikey will lay his head at night, because once Debbie and Vic know the truth, I doubt he will be welcomed in their home/homes.

I realized as soon as I left my last review stating we don't know what business Brian is in, was a complete error. Your story started with Gus and Brian, in Brian's office, at Kinnetik. Silly me. I think the whole Ethan debacle had me forgetting everything I previously read regarding this story. But then this chapter verified that, as well.  Still doesn't explain Brian opening a restaurant, though.

One last thing, good to know Justin is well on the mend, that bones have healed almost perfectly, and no lingering after effects other than a little weakness. All due to the tough taskmaster that Brian is, and also that the nightmares are slowly receding. But, still wondering how Brian knew about Justin and why he was adamant on helping him recover. WHY JUSTIN??? There are so very many abuse cases out there. What's Michael and Lindsay's views on Justin staying at Britin? Or, don't they know? I think Gus will be good for Justin.

Yes - DEFINITELY my FAVORITE of yours!!!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:52 am Title: The Three Bees

Secret sons, secret brothers, secret lovérs, kept secrets. The plot thickens. 

So so good and juicy. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Jenny at Britain. Ha! No entitlement there.

Ben and Brandon oh yeah.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2019 1:03 am Title: The Three Bees

Oh wow, great ideas.  My only question is what idiot would want Michael ????  Love how this story is going with lots of twists and turns.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 7:19 pm Title: The Three Bees

Was Lindsay also cheat ing in the loft or was she just there snooping looking for any dirt she can to get her way?

Brian and Brandon being related is going to set Michael off of course not as much as finding out Hunter is Ben's son and everyone finding out Michael is a Low Class Do It with the morals of a filthy napkin.

Deb will be soon please to hear Michael is using her home for his Low Rent Version of Brian hope his tricks enjoys the humiliation along with Michael?

Brian making sure Justin does his exercises and helping him recover will do them both good.

Ben staying in the loft will certainly chaf Michael and Lindsay's flat Asses just like knowing their access to Brian's money is off limits too along with his home.

Mel should stop wasting her breath and show Lindsay the outside of the door she isn't going to stop trying to be Mrs. Brian Kinney and the kids need a stable environment.

Thanks for the Update :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 4:27 pm Title: The Three Bees

This answers some questions and brings up more.  Will enjoy learning more with each chapter.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:59 pm Title: The Three Bees

What a juicy chapter!!!

The beginning is painful with Michael and Lindsay demanding a room for Jenny at Britin, then the loft they use when they need it, without asking.

Ben and Hunter: that would be a bad one for Michael.

Brian and Brandon: that could make a hit on Liberty Avenue, if they decided to chase together.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2019 4:18 am Title: Justin

I have started this story four times. The other three times, as soon as I got to: “Because he broke them. Ethan broke your hands.” I was sickened-shaking- and had a lump in my throat and started to cry.  Tonight, I decided I WAS going to read this, and started at: Three Days Later.

Remember when I told you I HATE Ethan, and to PLEASE have their time together very short?  Okay, I was very serious, but, Mother of God!  He broke all his fingers in his right hand??? Christ!  I hope Ethan gets time for assault! You Do Not Break Artists' fingers! A baseball bat, no less.  Gotta wonder the way Justin winced at the sound of it, if he was bashed when he was younger in this story.

Well, we know he didn't previously know Brian, but he did sound familiar - WHY?  I wondered a bit about Brian's statement that he was six when it first happened to him, then realized he was talking about his father. But, WHY does Brian want him to come and live with him?

We don't know what business Brian is in, as he's opening a restaurant. We don't know where Jen lives, and we don't know where Brian lives, but it's going to take another hour, at least, to get from Jen's to Brian's. How does Brian know Jen and Pearl? If Jewel is Justin's best friend, and yet Pearl's mom, just how old ARE these people?  And my everlasting gratitute to Pearl for taking the bat to Ethan's car and violin. I hope the violin was smashed to bits, and the car is beyond repair.

Now that Brian has entered the scene, and he's bringing Justin to live with him, (is he NOT the STUD?) I'm in for the long haul.  Thank you for this new story,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:43 pm Title: Justin

Loving the story so far. Can't wait for next update

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2019 1:07 pm Title: Justin

Good lord. Ethan's a lunatic (nothing new) and takes it out on Justin. A crusader for the abused swoops in to save him. Love it.

Did anyone break the fucking fiddler's fingers or do worse in retaliation? I mean like maybe he lost a hand at the wrist or something?

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