Date: Dec 31, 2022 1:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
That was a great ending to the story, and I agree with Brian, that if Melanie continues the way she has been, he very well could be asking the judge to terminate her rights to Gus. I can't see her changing anything about herself to try and get along with Brian at all. That woman is too stuck in her ways to do that. And Michael, he just lost his best friend, because Brian won't have anything more to do with him at all. And it's his own fault, too.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the way the characters played out.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:41 am Title: Chapter 6
Cute banner..perfect.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Sabina does great banners.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:40 am Title: Chapter 6
That was intense,..really.
Mindblowing work..thank u for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Gus is so sweet and cute.
Author's Response: Yes, I believe he would be.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Stupid mikey ..he does not know that mel had used him..now he lost his Best friend.
Author's Response: That's Michael for you.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Uggghhh...i hope she does not back out later ..as she is mother of JR too..she will want to be there for her too.
Author's Response: That remains to be seen.
Date: Jan 29, 2019 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
I read this a very long time ago on your other site. Loved it then, loved it now. I think I have read this at least ten times. It's the best kidnapping series I have ever read.
Starting with Kidnapped, I was so happy that it was because of Mel that little Gus was taken. The things she said to and about Brian were horrendous. That first day at the loft when Brian kicked them all out, had me hating all of them. Deb was as bad, if not worse, than the others. I was surprised by Emmett's and Ted's reactions, though. The trials and tribulations wondering about Gus, and how everyone seemed to just forget about him, focusing on JR, well, WOW!!!
Many months later in Custody. Thank heavens Deb gave a good review in court. Michael and Melanie, were total asswipes. I would love to see a sequel after the six months are up. Melanie's continued hatefulness, can only lead to her downfall, and I loved to see her parental rights terminated. Michael needs to have the people of the Avenue turn against him for not standing beside his best friend (Christ! I HATE that term.) and tell him to stay away, and not have anything to do with him. I certainly hope Brian severes all ties with him for etenity.
The excuses Melanie gave throughout this story, how she couldn't focus on Gus, couldn't go to Sicily, all of it, was bullshit! She had Michael and Debbie to take care of JR, if she really wanted Gus back. But because he was Brian's son, is why she didn't go. THAT"S why I say she should lose her rights to him as a mother,
AWESOME Story! Thank you for sharing.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: What a great review. I agree with you on almost every point. At this time there is no plan to have a further sequel.
Date: Jan 27, 2019 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 6
hope thre is a sequel and Brian wins his case and dumps Michael forever
Author's Response: No sequel, I'm afraid. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jan 27, 2019 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
fucking Michael
Author's Response: lol
Date: Jan 19, 2019 1:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Great story. Oh that Michael. He is the worst person followed by Melanie. They make a pair. Poor Jenny Rebecca getting genes from them LOL
Author's Response: lol Yes, JR doesn't have the best genetics.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. Off to continue reading.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 12:46 am Title: Chapter 6
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I really love anti Michael and Mel and Lindsey story's . This was great to read. Looking forward to more by you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your positive feedback.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
The fight is not over: I don't see Mel going to let Brian "win".
Author's Response: I don't think she has any choice.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was surprised to read that Debbie didn't go the same way as Michael. Good for her, and Brian.
Author's Response: Sometimes Deb has a mind of her own.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian is hurt, but he is not acting like a grown-up; the baths, then visit to Michael who is witness against him. I hope Mel won't use that as a threat.
Author's Response: Brian is out of control.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael sure knows what is best for Gus! What a friend!
Author's Response: Does he?
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
This going to be bloody! Mel is out of her mind and she hates Brian so much that it blinds her.
Author's Response: Could be very bloody.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
The battle is starting and Mel won't keep it clean.
I hope that Gus will be able to go on the swings after a few tries.
Author's Response: Mel doesn't really fight fair.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
brilliant - is that the end?
will there be a 6 month on chapter / story?
Author's Response: Probably not.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
It's good that the judge could see the real Brian, Gus needs his father. He is not the one Michael and Melanie still want to see. The past is the past
Author's Response: That's exactly right. Mel and Michael still think he's the old Brian.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:51 am Title: Chapter 6
I love the judges decision. Wouldn't it have been better to tell the judge that Melanie didn't require Michael to sign away his rights. Very hypacritical of her.
Author's Response: It always works out in my stories. lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Yay for Gus. I hope Brian and Justin join them for ice cream.
Author's Response: Hope!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:35 am Title: Chapter 4
Brian is right. Michael does think he's better even though he isn't. Brian did do the wrong thing by his pain management, not realizing it could hurt Gus.
Author's Response: Bad mistakes.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:26 am Title: Chapter 3
There goes the title of 'best friend'. No friend would do what Michael did.
Author's Response: I never thought Michael was really Brian's friend. He was more interested in himself.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2019 2:18 am Title: Chapter 2
Melanie is in the wrong. There is a lot that could be said about her. I hope Gus shys away from her when in court.
Author's Response: That remains to be seen.