Date: Jul 09, 2020 6:07 am Title: Prologue
Just found this story couldn't stop reading. Is that really the last chapter,? Say it ain't so, please
Date: Mar 17, 2018 3:22 am Title: Mommy Dearest
Now brian take notice. He must save the boy
Date: Mar 17, 2018 3:15 am Title: Prologue
The first ch so heartbreaking :( poor justin and tommy
Date: May 08, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Past Forward
So good!! Please keep writing. I can't desire to see what happens next!!
Date: Jan 16, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Past Forward
Erik is being a dick right now...reminds me of how Mel was shortly after Gus was born. He shouldn't take his anger about Philip out on Ted, he's not the one who lied to him his whole life.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2017 2:06 pm Title: Past Forward
It's good to see more on this story. Since Erik was lied to, he should be mad at the people who lied to him. Where is Alex Wilder when you need him?
Date: Jan 16, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Past Forward
I've been reading from the start and I apologize for missing the last update. There's lots of archiving and posts shift quickly.
Justin has really bad luck. I hope that's ended with the agreement to ice Craig out. Brian seems fine. Poor Ted and Erik and now his back from death dad. Poor Mel.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2016 9:21 pm Title: Wide Awake
Craigs a bastard. He did all those things to Justin for money. Well, he's not going to get any. Marissa is safe and sound. Michael planted camera's? That's going to go over well. Hopefully Carl will be able to straighten things out. Looks like we have a new player and it sounds like he's Michael's dad? Lindsay is in deep trouble. At least the kids are safe.
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting. Phillip Winters is Erik's dad though, not Michael's. Vic being his other father. Yep, kids all safe. Lindsay is in soo much trouble. Lol.
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:28 am Title: The Storm before the Storm.
First, here's a hug ((SLHR)). Second, wooee thus was a bit dark wasn't it? Comas, missing children, murder, and child services dundundunhhhh. I think you handled it well. I just hate the idea of Justin in trouble because the baby fell. I think finding a body could weird pretty much anybody out.
Thanks for the update!!
PS chocolate chip cookies, hot buttered popcorn, turtle ice cream, Snickers deep fried, oh, and cheesecake<---- I have it on good authority that all comfort food is calorie free for at least two weeks after the election. So pick your salve and apply generously.
Author's Response:
Awww thank you. I'm fixing to post new chapter. The story was always planned this way but the darker parts were added because I felt bad. Hmmm..turtle ice cream. Never tasted deep friend snickers. Love cheesecake. Hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: Nov 12, 2016 4:37 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.
Boy, everything really IS messed up now. How are you gonna fix this? Lol. TAG
Author's Response:
I hope it'll make sense. LOL. New chapter coming up.
Date: Nov 10, 2016 9:26 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.
Soooo....how does Justin go from a concerned parent that took their child to get medical treatment to getting arrested for child neglect? I can't even suspend reality enough to see how this is even possible. Hopefully things will become more clear soon.
Author's Response:
You'll see. Hopefully my reality isn't too bad. I know I make it a little hard but I do try and stay in the wide realms of possibility. New chapter coming up. Thanks for commenting.
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2016 6:19 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.
At least on the bright side Gus and JR are together. How does going to the bathroom turn into neglect. If Justin was neglectful he wouldn't have taken the baby to the hospital. Stupid people.
Author's Response:
I hope the new chapter explains everything. Thanks for commenting.
Date: Sep 29, 2016 11:29 pm Title: Lindsay
Gosh, Lindsay killed Mel and she confessed to Carl, then tried to od. I wonder if this is another plan of hers? Like setting up the insanity defense. Why not just go home and take the Police to the house? Perhaps, I'm overthinking. But, Linds' life is over.
ps thx for the quick update
Author's Response:
I"m so sorry. This story has given me such problems. I'll get on a roll and it goes away. I hope you like this chapter. As to why not take police herself? She was too cowderdice.
Date: Sep 29, 2016 4:57 am Title: Lindsay
Confused, if they are living separate and still sleeping in their own beds alone, am I not Understanding? In the story it says that since they decided to live together. Or do you mean when they get a House? Sorry for my confusion.
Author's Response:
Sorry I wasn't clearer. Living together in the house. Brian let Justin stay in last chapter because he was so traumatized by finding the Mel.
Date: Sep 29, 2016 4:13 am Title: Lindsay
Great chapter. I hope that the cops get there in time to save her so she can go to jail. Poor Ted, please let the third baby be okay. Brian' so got it for Justin. One question, is Brian and Justin actually living together in one apartment because it said that they are bring things to eachother Places? Or are they moving stuff back an forth, living together in both apartments?
Should there be a minor character death warning on this.
Author's Response:
I'll put up the warning. They still live separate but move stuff back and forth.
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2016 7:49 pm Title: Lindsay
I hope Ted's baby's come through this okay. Lindsay has no luck so I assume that she survives taking all those pills. Poor Justin, I hope something good happens for him.
Author's Response:
Ted's story is gonna get sad, just a fair warning, it is Ted. That's a lot of people ready for Lindsay to live. Justin's good is coming, I promise.
Date: Sep 28, 2016 5:21 pm Title: Lindsay
Woah....OK. that answered my question. she obviously did know about Mel as did surprisingly Sam. Now he has that to hold over her. Will Lindsey succeeed in killing herself or will Sam get to her in time? Will he even try to save her or see it as his way to keep himself as uninvolved as possible.
Feeling terrible for Ted. Oh I hope the little one comes through it OK.
Justin of course will be effected as well. PTSD all over again.
So much going on with our boys and family.
As always, wonderful chapter!!
Elaine
Author's Response:
I'm thinking about changing something that I planned on from the beginning. I'm not seeing it going over well. Glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: Sep 28, 2016 1:41 pm Title: Lindsay
That......That.......THAT BITCH!! Oh now she's sorry....AGAIN... but she should pay with her life at the hands of others, not her own. And Sam should definitely go down as an accessory. Seriously, the two of them deserve each other! If she had left that dirty man's extra 'Belly Button' alone, perhaps she wouldn't be in the mess she's in. Lonely Lindsay??? By a new toy or a male latex doll! Geeze! She deserves everything coming to her and more just for being stupid!
Lawd, it's not even 10am EST and I need Beam after reading that! LOL
WRITE On Pam!
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
HAHA. Too funny. I'm trying to write but i've ditched the two tries i've done on this new chapter. I'm glad you 'liked' it.
Date: Sep 28, 2016 1:27 pm Title: Lindsay
Love that harridan of a wasp says love....oooh tell me she gets saved and does time. Exits stage left to find cold compress and smelling salts
Author's Response:
Lol. I guess people want her alive.
Date: Sep 28, 2016 11:11 am Title: Lindsay
Okay....I need a moment after this chapter....
Author's Response:
Good or Bad?
Date: Sep 28, 2016 10:43 am Title: Lindsay
Please dont let that bitch Lindsey get away with it. With her killing herself she deserve to go jail
Author's Response:
I have writing the next chapter two different ways, I tossed both of them because they didn't fit right. I truthfully have no idea what i'm gonna do to her.
Date: Sep 27, 2016 1:04 pm Title: The House
Oh my days!!!! So brilliant and unexpected, the pregnancy and now Mel...good for Justin for standing up for himself. I knew Lindz is a wasp but a killer bee surely not...so looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Lindsay is very ooc here.
Date: Sep 27, 2016 12:04 am Title: The House
What!!! Lindsay did this -- poor Gus. Poor Mel.
What an update! Pls don"t leave us hangin' too long.
Author's Response:
Gus is going to be hard to write.
Date: Sep 26, 2016 3:54 pm Title: The House
Oh my, we all know that Lindsay can be a bitch, sometimes but where do that killing instinct come from? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
THank you.