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Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2016 8:28 am Title: The Storm before the Storm.

First, here's a hug ((SLHR)).  Second, wooee thus was a bit dark wasn't it?  Comas, missing children, murder, and child services dundundunhhhh. I think you handled it well.  I just hate the idea of Justin in trouble because the baby fell.  I think finding a body could weird pretty much anybody out.  

Thanks for the update!!

PS chocolate chip cookies, hot buttered popcorn, turtle ice cream, Snickers deep fried, oh, and cheesecake<---- I have it on good authority that all comfort food is calorie free for at least two weeks after the election. So pick your salve and apply generously.



Author's Response:

Awww thank you. I'm fixing to post new chapter. The story was always planned this way but the darker parts were added because I felt bad. Hmmm..turtle ice cream. Never tasted deep friend snickers. Love cheesecake. Hope you enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2016 4:37 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.

Boy, everything really IS messed up now. How are you gonna fix this? Lol. TAG



Author's Response:

I hope it'll make sense. LOL. New chapter coming up.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2016 9:26 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.

Soooo....how does Justin go from a concerned parent that took their child to get medical treatment to getting arrested for child neglect?  I can't even suspend reality enough to see how this is even possible. Hopefully things will become more clear soon.



Author's Response:

You'll see. Hopefully my reality isn't too bad. I know I make it a little hard but I do try and stay in the wide realms of possibility. New chapter coming up. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2016 6:19 pm Title: The Storm before the Storm.

At least on the bright side Gus and JR are together.  How does going to the bathroom turn into neglect.  If Justin was neglectful he wouldn't have taken the baby to the hospital.  Stupid people.



Author's Response:

I hope the new chapter explains everything. Thanks for commenting.

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