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Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 5:42 am Title: New Beginnings

Gus and Tommy are simply adorable! And Justin balances the three babes like he was born to do it. Brian's feeling the need to take care of Justin in spite of initally thinking that Justin was out getting off. That's a great thing.

I laughed at Brian's switch to black panels and I'm sure that every single parent- and some married ones too- could relate to his reasoning. Don't make me have a RuPaul quoting moment, even if it is taken out of context, LOL

Poor Justin but then again not so much. Even if it was because of a nightmare that he arrived Brian's loft, it's still where he belongs. The situation could have gone so far left. Brian could have been standoffish and Justin could have been as well when Brian asked him what was wrong. But it shows growth that Justin asked for what he wanted but I'm happy it didn't and that Brian didn't turn Justin away when he so clearly needs comforting.  

Looking forward to MORE~

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

They're a little less adorable in new chapter but there is a reason for it. Justin is good with the kids. LOL. You can quote RuPaul anytime. I use quotes from Drag Race in my head all the time "Go back to Party City where you belong" is my favorite. More about Justin's nightmare and reasoning for coming on to Brian in later chapter. I don't think Brian ever could turn Justin away, the whole show was written on it.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 1:44 am Title: The Date

Oh Boy, Brian isn't going to be happy and jump to conclusions. I get the feeling Brian want's be to a family with Justin, but the things happening now aren't going to help.I'm glad Justin had fun on the date. I don't want to be anywhere near the hospital meaning no visiting Michael. I don't the Brian going to be happy bring the Marisa going to see Michael. Please post more soon!!



Author's Response:

Brian is the king of jumping to conclusions. At the moment he has no idea what he wants. Just that Justin with other guys piss him off. Michael is tough writing. It will end soon, very soon.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 1:12 am Title: The Date

Jealousy thy name is Brian Kinney! This should be interesting!

I'm glad that Hector and Justin had fun on their 'date.' It sounds like it will be really great for Justin to get out and make some friends of his own. I feel bad for Debbie but definitely NOT for Michael. And somehow I don't totally buy that he is insane either based on the things he was saying to Brian when he was attacking the Jeep with the tire iron.

I continue to be totally absorbed in this story! Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Can't help it, I love jealous Brian. Truthfully, my s/l with Michael is going to be disturbing but not for reasons most people would think in a anti-mikey story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 12:47 am Title: The Date

PS.  Did they really go to the diner for a midnight snake or was it a midnight snack?  The image in my head was not good.



Author's Response:

Oops. Yes I meant snack. I can't believe I wrote that. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2016 12:33 am Title: The Date

Oh no.  Now Brian thinks that Justin is spending the night with Hector, when he's actually staying with Debbie.  Now that's funny.  So Ted is not a carrier.  Hope he sees a doctor and finds out what's wrong.  Maybe whoever tested him in college got it wrong. 



Author's Response:

Brian's not handling it well.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 9:25 pm Title: Dinner and a show

Hi, I love the update and I feel really bad for Brian. I can see Brian really cares about Justin after all this time. Michael, I hope they send you away for good. Aww, I love Tommy and Gus together. I ca picture Gus being very protective of Tommy. Tommy and Gus I can see helping getting their daddies together. I'm not sure how to feel about Lindsay. Is Ted pregnant and doesn't know it? Is Brian going to Justin about him going on a date or is he going to start distancing himself for a bit?  Please post more soon!!



Author's Response:

LOL about Michael. Tommy and Gus are adorable. They are a great team together. Lindsay, she's going to be very in character, if you remember what she was doing with Sam, I just moved it another point in time.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 9:07 pm Title: Dinner and a show

That little..... Thank goodness Brian had a few sweet moments with the boys before all hell broke loose with the Idiot man! I think the patrons of the Diner were just as shocked as Brian to see Michael in such a state. Not surprised he would go cray-cray. He's always been a petulant child whose body reached and surpassed puberty while his mind never did. Can't wait to see where you go with this!!

As for Justin, I doth detect just a smidge of jealousy in Mr. Kinney! At least I hope so!

Happy writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael is not dealing well. More moments with the boys in later chapters.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2016 9:00 pm Title: Dinner and a show

Woah!  Go away for a week and all hell breaks loose.  I'm kinda surprised no one mentioned to Brian that his car was being beat up unless they were in shock.  That must be it.  Mikey needs medical help right away.  PS- Is Ted pregnant?



Author's Response:

Yes, they were diff. in shock. Teddy, Teddy, Teddy. I want to tell you the answer but I can't. It will spoil it. But this new chapter will make everything clearer.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 6:59 pm Title: A Fally

Hi,

I love the new update. I feel really bad for Tommy because he stuck in the middle. I don't know why is Justin giving up on Brian without trying? I'm hoping Justin isn't going to fall for Alex? Does Justin want Brian? What will Tommy do if Brian leaves for good or a little while? Please post more soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Justin and Brian are always end game in my stories. But that being said, Brian feels like he needs to make up for lost time, and this is the first time Justin is free to be a little wild too. Tommy will have both of them just it'll take a while for them to settle. Don't worry Alex isn't going to show that kind of interest in Justin. He was on Liberty Avenue for a reason, we will see in next chapter.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 7:53 am Title: A Fally

Looks like you were able to save your lost chapter. Hoorah! TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks. I had to rewrite it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 15, 2016 2:12 am Title: A Fally

What an interesting day Tommy is having.  He got to meet his favorite character of his favorite show.  He may be only four but he's so smart.  Curious about what Michael will do about Brian ignoring him. Glad to see that Erik and Ted have befriended Justin.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm still on the fence with exactly what's going to happen with Michael.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 11:46 am Title: Ted Talks

Loving this fic! I think Ted will have something something very interesting to tell us...  Loving forward to next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you're liking it.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2016 8:03 am Title: Prologue

My heart is going to Justin but he has done what is best for his child. This story is off to a good start.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 11:57 pm Title: Ted Talks

Hi, I love the past two updates. I have to say I really feel bad for Tommy because he caught in the middle, innocent child. I can't believe they took Justin, daughter too. I hope Brian tells Debbie. I hope Brian and Justin really get to talk. I hope Tommy really believes about Brian being mad. Please post more soon.



Author's Response:

I'm trying my best to make them as real as possible. Which means they all are going to mess up a little. I'm so happy people are liking and commenting.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 3:59 pm Title: Ted Talks

Somehow I don't think we've seen the end of Michael's meddling. And I'm worried about this mysterious illness of Ted's. But most important, when is Brian gonna go claim Justin as his own? More please. TAG



Author's Response:

Michael is not over yet. Ted is only a little in new chapter but the one after he'll get a big surprise, maybe good maybe bad. Who knows.

Reviewer: qaf fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2016 4:03 am Title: Ted Talks

A few weeks is too long. Please let Michael get what's coming to him, I want him to HURT in the worst way. 



Author's Response:

It'll truthfully be a little while until Mikey gets whats coming to him. And it'll get worse before better.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 9:02 pm Title: Ted Talks

So...I put off reading this because in all honessty, I'm really not a big fan of mpregs. However...the fact it was an anti-Mikey drew me in. Figured I'd give it a go.

Guh.....completely sucked in now! Major intrigue and angst. Heart is bleeding for Justin, tommy, Erik, Brian, Ted...all of them! (except michael...I hope he gets whats coming to him!) I wanted to reach thorugh and destry Craig and Maxwell. I honestly thought Erik was going to be up to no good, but you brought that around in a great way! YAY!! He has a family. :) Mind you, family or not, I doubt he'll let Michael pull shit with Justin. 

I'm so glad I read this. Keep it coming!!

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

I almost made Erik bad, but I thought Michael was going to be bad enough for the family.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 2:36 pm Title: Ted Talks

It's a good thing that Brian can tell that Mikey is lying.  I'd hate to think he believed him.



Author's Response:

I would hate that too. I couldn't stomach or write such a thing.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2016 12:56 pm Title: Ted Talks

I hope Brian tells Debbie!!! Since he doesn't want to pummel Michael, I'm sure she would hit the little turd! He's such a self-centered idiot. I hope Brian doesn't forgive him or buy into his 'Woe is Me' manipulations.

I had to laugh at Tommy drawing on the walls. I've been through that more times than I can count with my own boys. And although it has been many years since then, sometimes I find my wishing for those moments back! It's on of the first shared memories that Brian and Justin have of Tommy; a moment within the turmoil that someday they'll remember with fondness. Although Craig's reasoning for having the prenup drawn up the way it was wasn't at all altrustic, hopefully it will all work out in Justin's favor so that he can truly be independent.

Poor Teddy! But then again maybe not.....maybe Ted is preggers (or at least I hope so!). I always thought he deserved some happiness of his own. 

I can't wait for the next update and the aftermath of Brian's reaction to Michael's constant lies. 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Brian is being tight lipped about the whole thing It's sorta explained in new chapter.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2016 12:16 am Title: Home

This is a very interesting story.  Just read all 9 chapters.  Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope you keep enjoying it.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:56 am Title: Home

Yay! Justin's safe & back with Tommy! TAG



Author's Response:

Yay.

Reviewer: MissMerlot Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:48 am Title: Home

So very good, cannot wait for canowhipass* that is gonna be opened upside wittle Mikey's and bully Maxwell's heads by Triple B once he comes down from where he's gone and sees what he has is what he needs

Thanks for writing

MissMerlot

*please make it a big can - the size of Texas with a no you cannot come into my life policy



Author's Response:

Chapter 10 will have a little bit of the Michael confrontation but its not the end of it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:37 am Title: Home

It's good that Justin and Tommy are back together and soon Justin's little girl will be there as well. 



Author's Response:

Yep, couldn't keep them apart that long.

Reviewer: Bella Donne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2016 2:20 am Title: Home

I was looking forward to an update and this one was awesome.  Can't wait to Mikey to get his.

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Mikey get a little taste int he next chapter but not everyting coming to him.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 30, 2016 11:50 pm Title: Home

Very intense chapter!! I CAN'T WAIT for the next one and definitely not for the talk with Michael. I really wonder what excuses he will give for his unforgivable mistreatment of Justin and interference with Brian's choices.

Glad that Erik returned and maybe even has more insight than Justin is initially willing to share.

As for Maxwell, now that Justin has filed an official complaint, I wonder what the rat-bastard will try to do next. At least Craig did something right, even if it was for the wrong reasons. Between the divorce and the fact that Marissa is alive and well, I don't imagine that he will just go away quietly without making everyone's life hell in the process. Hopefully someone can expedite the divorce proceedings though. That's really the first step to Justin getting free.

Looking forward to more of this fascinating tale! Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Next chapter had him and Mikey but it's not as bad as it will be.

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