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Reviewer: Charlotte_Eats_Apples Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

WHAT IS HE GOING TO SAY, AHHH! Also how rude of Mikey to keep showing up. Does he not learn?

Author's Response:

Micahel is the epitome of "its all abouut me".  He won't learn.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2019 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

Very proud of Brian for calling Ted. Very sorry that Ted didn't make sure the door was shut behind him.

Michael is going to make a big stink if he finds exactly why Brian and Ted are getting rid of the liquor. Not going to be pretty at all.



Author's Response:

Michael will try to pull the I'm your best friend card, but we all know that it isn't true.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2019 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

Michael is a wild card. Whether he is a help or hinderence is up to you.l



Author's Response:

Not a Michael fan, so should be interesting to see what happens.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2019 5:35 am Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

What an evil cliffhanger! With Michael as the usual actor, not wondering why his key doesn't work anymore.

Brian did the right thing by calling Ted; only him could help him and remain neutral.



Author's Response:

Ted is a great friend and will help Brian in anyway possible.  Just wish he would have locked the door, but leave it to Michael to not grab a clue that his key doens't work.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2019 1:08 am Title: Chapter 16- Temptation

Great chapter.  Cliffhanger, but that is what makes a story interesting.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

I don't usually find a great cliffhanger, but this one seemed to fit.

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