Date: Jul 12, 2021 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation
WHAT IS HE GOING TO SAY, AHHH! Also how rude of Mikey to keep showing up. Does he not learn?
Author's Response:
Micahel is the epitome of "its all abouut me". He won't learn.
Date: Jul 28, 2019 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation
Very proud of Brian for calling Ted. Very sorry that Ted didn't make sure the door was shut behind him.
Michael is going to make a big stink if he finds exactly why Brian and Ted are getting rid of the liquor. Not going to be pretty at all.
Author's Response:
Michael will try to pull the I'm your best friend card, but we all know that it isn't true.
Date: Jul 28, 2019 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 16- Temptation
Michael is a wild card. Whether he is a help or hinderence is up to you.l
Author's Response:
Not a Michael fan, so should be interesting to see what happens.
Date: Jul 28, 2019 5:35 am Title: Chapter 16- Temptation
What an evil cliffhanger! With Michael as the usual actor, not wondering why his key doesn't work anymore.
Brian did the right thing by calling Ted; only him could help him and remain neutral.
Author's Response:
Ted is a great friend and will help Brian in anyway possible. Just wish he would have locked the door, but leave it to Michael to not grab a clue that his key doens't work.
Date: Jul 28, 2019 1:08 am Title: Chapter 16- Temptation
Great chapter. Cliffhanger, but that is what makes a story interesting. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
I don't usually find a great cliffhanger, but this one seemed to fit.