Date: Feb 26, 2019 5:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This would have changed so much in the series. I could never understand why Brian went to Michael that night, even with their history. Every time Brian chose Michael over Justin he gave Michael more ammunition to use against Justin in his sly vicious way. I really do prefer your version. Thank you :--)
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond, hangs head in shame... I've always wondered why he went to Michael myself, it only reinforced Michael fantasy of one day being Brian's husband... I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2019 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
But will he remember in the morning. Can he confront Mikey for his attitude toward Justin? Love your stories.
Author's Response: Hmmm... I'm thinking he will this time around, he needs Justin's support and understanding. "Can he confront Mikey for his attitude toward Justin?" Now that is the question? I might have to write a good smackdown, just because Mikey so deserves it! Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen
Date: Feb 20, 2019 6:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a terrific story. Great writing. I love your short stories. I enjoy the long stories as long as the chapters aren't really long. I read one a few weeks ago that the shortest chapter was over 8,000 words. I have to read those over a few days.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I understand the chapter length thing, I used to write longer chapters too. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen
Date: Feb 20, 2019 5:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting POV: if only Brian had the guts to do it this way and not run to Michael's afterwards.
Author's Response: I so agree, it was Justin he needed to reassure him he was loved. Instead of reinforcing Michael's misconception that Brian needed and wanted him... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen