Reviews For Fool Me Not
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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2019 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow.  That was spectacular.  Justin played the epic prank and won the April Fools day joke through it was late.  But will he remember in the morning?

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2019 5:26 am Title: Chapter 2

Goodness... that was a scary trick. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 05, 2019 5:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Perfect start. Written in the best Shakespearean ‘Comedy of Errors’ style.  I wasn’t expecting the brain aneurysm though…  TAG

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 04, 2019 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well, Justin got him good. Yes, different really isn't bad.

You brought up the agreeable points though, Cause countless times Sunshine was lynched around Brian's trickings & all which was never easy things to handle in life.

Great writing & story. Love it. *Hugs :)

Reviewer: Lorie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 2

 

Great story. Hope you're already planning on next years story.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG! Nasty Justin! That was not nice. Can't wait for Jenn, molly, and Mel to get there and berate him for worrying them and making them fly to England. Ha! That would teach him.

Brian better come up with something good next year.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Excellent!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 6:28 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this was good.  Great writing.  Maybe you will think of a story for next year.  That would be wonderful.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Apr 03, 2019 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great beginning! What started as a really bad joke may have saved Justin from something more serious. At least he is under surveillance.



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2019 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a great idea, but how something that should be fun can turn bad.  Great writing.  Can't wait to see how it goes.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Hope you like the rest of the story. The completion just posted. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2019 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is one April fools joke that went bad, or is it?



Author's Response:

Little bit of bad but growing in a way I thinkl. 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2019 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh man. Kind of a good thing he jumped out of the car then. Something could've happen while they were away and Brian would never forgive himself. Although Brian's trick was really a good one.

Brian is so hurt. He better get his ass to the hospital as soon as he hangs up the phone.

 



Author's Response:

Very good. Hope you enjoy the last half of the story.

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