Date: Apr 05, 2019 5:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect start. Written in the best Shakespearean ‘Comedy of Errors’ style. I wasn’t expecting the brain aneurysm though… TAG
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2019 3:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning! What started as a really bad joke may have saved Justin from something more serious. At least he is under surveillance.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2019 8:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a great idea, but how something that should be fun can turn bad. Great writing. Can't wait to see how it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Hope you like the rest of the story. The completion just posted.
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2019 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is one April fools joke that went bad, or is it?
Author's Response:
Little bit of bad but growing in a way I thinkl.
Date: Apr 02, 2019 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man. Kind of a good thing he jumped out of the car then. Something could've happen while they were away and Brian would never forgive himself. Although Brian's trick was really a good one.
Brian is so hurt. He better get his ass to the hospital as soon as he hangs up the phone.
Author's Response:
Very good. Hope you enjoy the last half of the story.