Date: Apr 21, 2019 4:15 am Title: Chapter 7
Cuaght up on the story tonight. I just really enjoy the normal things you put into the stories. Playing in the park, small conversations, sleeping and the little ways they take care of each other. It really gets you feeling like you are experiencing the events. difficult to read as I remember feeling the deep feelings of loss when my dad died and he's been dead for 35 years. Imagining lossing any of the people in my life now would be devastating.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think it’s fun to include all of those little “asides” that make things more like real life. When I write, I put myself in the character’s headspace and picture the scene, then I just write it down. I’m sorry to hear about your dad. <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2019 2:29 am Title: Chapter 7
I agree, Deb is out there among the stars, shining bright, just like she always did.
Author's Response:
I really liked that image...glad you did too! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2019 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful update. Death is so hard to deal with even though we all go thru it at some time, you gave them the little time away from the sorrow so well. Great writing. If you celebrate, Happy Easter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3 It is very difficult to deal with, especially when someone meant a lot to you, maybe more than you realized (which is what is going on with Brian here). Happy Easter to you too!
Date: Apr 20, 2019 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Rob ad Adam showing up with the girls was just the distraction they needed. It seem to work for a while. Besides, their bodies were telling them too that they needed a break.
Deb, out there among the stars. Fitting.
Author's Response:
I thought it was really fitting, too. <3 They needed the support of their friends, and of course the innocence of children is never a bad thing!