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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2019 2:19 am Title: Chapter 11

I didn't expect Joan to show up, but I loved the way you handeled it.  She has no reason to be there except to cause trouble.  Love that Michael said they can do it together.  I thought Michael coming to Justin's aid when he saw him talking to Joan was a great scene.  Great job, as always.  Excellent story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3 I'm glad you liked Michael and Justin there. The last thing either of them wanted was for Brian to have to interact with Joan on a day that was already emotionally trying enough.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 6:43 pm Title: Chapter 11

Thought Joan was going to show up, but no idea Justin would be so venomous when talking to her. Michael was very diplomatic about it. Thank goodness Brian didn't see her, but have a feeling he knew she was there.

Finally Brian's taking his pain in hand so to speak. Him and Rob doing yoga, good.

The graveside service is the last hurdle. They'll make it through. They are doing a bit better now.



Author's Response:

Justin was pissed that she had the nerve to show up, and was in protective mode over his husband, for sure. (And shhhh, don't tell Brian he was doing real yoga...hahaha.)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 11

Why Joanie showed up is beyond me.  Letting someone throw her out would have been nice.



Author's Response:

Justin and Michael took care of it without causing a scene, which was key to making sure Brian didn't know she was even there. ;)

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2019 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  So glad Brian didn't have to deal with Joanie.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, and me too! I didn't want him to have to deal with her, but I also thought she'd probably show up...being a church lady and all.

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