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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2020 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 10 - My Boy

good one

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2019 9:03 am Title: Chapter 10 - My Boy

Debbie is a real mother hen and takes care of her coop.

Hunter and his on point proposal: I love how daring he is.

And then, Justin arriving so much earlier and ending Brian's wait.

Great story; thank you for sharing it!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 9 - California Dreamin'

Father Tom reminds me the very hot first of him, Justin and Brian.

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Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Words of Love

Brian could appear as stingy and a major asshole, but he is very generous and doesn't remind people that he helped. Well, except for the money Justin spent in NYC after the loft robbery.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Look Through My Window

Life seems very boring without the sunny twinkie! The end is surprising; I bet Brian will be checking his package to see if he didn't turn lesbian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 11:08 am Title: Chapter 6 - It's All the Rage

Excellent talk, full of hidden truths that will help JT move forward without too much spleen.

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Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:57 am Title: Chapter 5 - Got A Feelin'

F*****g Michael: he doesn't lose any opportunity to fill Justin's head with doubts. Too bad for him, Brian and Justin can read their minds again.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:51 am Title: Chapter 4 - Go Where You Want to Go

I don't think Brian is worried or hurt by the gossip he heard; he doesn't mind. What he minds is his business' worth and his clients, new, old, undecided.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:43 am Title: Chapter 3 - Dedicated to the One I Love

It's hard to be in a beautiful place and not be able to share with someone you love.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:28 am Title: Chapter 2 - I Call Your Name

Socks and hoodie: did Justin forget them or did he let them so Brian will be "forced" to think about him?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1 - Dream a Little Dream of Me

It's never easy to see them parting. Maybe Brian wouldn't hesitate too long. Justin is right to go while Brian is sleeping; Saying goodbye at the airport is just too hard.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2019 5:34 am Title: Chapter 1 - Dream a Little Dream of Me

Heavy heart, I feel bad for them.

Great beginning.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2019 12:20 am Title: Chapter 10 - My Boy

What a fantastic story.  Loved the songs and any changes you made added to the story.  Terrific writing.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Dream a Little Dream of Me

I love that song.  That era is some of my favorite music.  Great  first chapter.

Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 10 - My Boy

Thanks Sab, this was really a good read!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 4:19 pm Title: Chapter 10 - My Boy

Yay, just the ending anyone could want.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 9 - California Dreamin'

Shame he isn't able to get through to Joanie.  Nice talk about faith.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Words of Love

Puts everything into prospective.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Look Through My Window

Can't believe Brian mentioned Valentine's day!  Miracles do occur

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 6 - It's All the Rage

Small talk that lead to understanding.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Got A Feelin'

Michael does his best to cause problems.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Go Where You Want to Go

Interesting scene.  Who was having the conversation about Brian?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:59 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Dedicated to the One I Love

Smart of Justin to call at that time.  Brian can't forget him.  I always wondered why Michael didn't go.  With his help Rage would have folded much sooner.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 - I Call Your Name

Justin is smart.  Not going to let Brian forget.

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Date: Apr 14, 2019 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Dream a Little Dream of Me

Going away to LA was good and not so good.  Can they keep it together?

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