Date: Apr 21, 2019 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1 - Settling
What a dark and sad beginning; I can feel how Justin is down and off; gone the fighty sunshinning twinkie.
It's one thing to leave Brian, then Ethan, but going back to his father is the worst thing to do.
Author's Response: But what other choice does Justin have?
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2019 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling
Great first chapter. Something so different. Can't wait to see where you take them. Sorry, I am just starting to read this story. RL even gets in the way of readers. Wonderful writing. May not review until the end as I sometimes do since once I do start reading,, I have to keep at it. Off to chapter 2
Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a try. Hope you enjoy it.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2019 2:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling
That happens sometimes but a story is still a good story even death fics. Especially is an author worked hard to write it.
Author's Response: Very true.
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2019 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1 - Settling
I am so glad you finished this story. I wish I could have read the original to compare. I wonder if she decided to delete because of reviews. It's a shame when things like that happen.
Author's Response: There was controversy because her story kept Brian and Justin apart.+
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2019 5:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Settling
Truer words were never spoken.
Author's Response: Glad you think so.