[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2019 4:23 pm Title: Chapter Two
Yeah, Ben is here too!
The tragic story of the prom revisited is well done and the impact of Michael warm warning is huge: Justin just left without trying to fight.
I really love the way you write and build this story: thank you for sharing your talent with us, mere and avid readers.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I couldn't leave Ben out of this! The prom bashing arc is one of my kryptonites, I write a lot of stuff that centers around it. I just haven't posted them yet! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this!
LC
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I couldn't leave Ben out of this! The prom bashing arc is one of my kryptonites, I write a lot of stuff that centers around it. I just haven't posted them yet! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this!
LC
Date: Apr 26, 2019 7:26 am Title: Chapter Two
Ben is a surprise here! So he taught Justin to be a sniper. He also thinks about Brian even though he continued without him. I can not imagine their meeting but I am sure you will surprise us like this whole story. So original!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love putting Ben in roles that he doesn't usually have. He is such a good father figure to Hunter on the show, I thought he would make a great mentor for Justin. Not necessarily mentor in the sense that Ben helps him be a good person, but he does help Justin be the best sniper he can. I'm happy that you are enjoying this! More to come soon, I promise!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 6:47 am Title: Chapter Two
So, that explains how Justin became a sniper. Didn’t expect Ben here... TAG
Author's Response:
Yep!! Had to throw in that little twist. I love Ben too much to keep him out of my story! thank you for reading!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 1:05 am Title: Chapter Two
Woah! Mr. B is Ben? That's amazing and great at the same time. I am so enjoying this.
Author's Response:
I’m so glad that you are enjoying this!! Thank you so much for reading!!!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2019 1:03 am Title: Chapter Two
FANTASTIC writing. What a shock that it is Ben. I was hooked on this story from the start. You are doing an amazing job.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I am so glad you’re enjoying it!
LC
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2019 9:26 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love this look into how Justin began his career. And boy are you sneaky! Ben! I never would have thought Ben was the one helping Justin.
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Deb
Author's Response:
It got Kathy too!!! Hehehe. I thought I was rather clever with that twist lol. Thank you so much!
LC