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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2019 3:10 am Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter.  I can feel the angst and the love from all the characters. You do a great job of shattering the thoughts and feelings of the characters.



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3 This story was super interesting to write and the fast pace and high angst, and the immediacy that comes from writing in present tense, together with the intimacy of first person. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2019 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 6

The news is not good, but as long as he has Adam and the girls things will be ok



Author's Response:

Yes, he has his family to help him get through this! <3 Support is such a huge help in dealing with something like this.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2019 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter demonstrating the deep scared feelings Rob and Adam have. But we also saw love Adams assertion that they are a team and will face anything together. Brian’s calm ‘fuck it we will work around it’ persona was what Rob needed at that time. Loving Rob in his own way 



Author's Response:

Thank you! That was part of what I wanted to portray in this story -- more of Adam...his personality, his attitude on their partnership, and the way he cares for his husband. I feel like the "fuck it, we'll work around it" is so Brian...he'll do anything for a friend. And he'll especially do anything for Rob at this point in their lives and friendship. So glad you enjoyed the chapter. <3

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2019 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great update.  Really love that this is Rob's story with Brian there for him.  These characters are a terrific addition to the story of Brian and Justin.  Wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love hearing that you all are enjoying hearing some of Rob's story as much as we all love hearing about Brian and Justin. I thought it would be interesting to flip the script and have Brian being Rob's support for a little bit. (And we're setting something up for later too!)

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