Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2020 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 48: Brian searches for Melanie and Gus

Oooh, I like this! So much to look at here. Where's Lindsay? Did she do something despicable, and that's why Melanie left, taking Gus? Is she hiding from Lindsay? Was her life threatened?

Justin Taylor - once he meets the God Kinney, which head will he be thinking with? It might be easier to move past him than we think - or - he might really be a tough S.O.B.

Great job, again!