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Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2019 4:28 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

"Novotny and the Carrier": Gus really doesn't like them, which is not a big deal regarding Michael, but it's very sad that he feels like this towards his mother.

Debbie and Carl are a great pair, acting like teenagers full of hormones.

Mel is a huge help in this story.

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2019 8:21 am Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Still really loving this story. 😍

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 9:27 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

This is really coming to a head and I'm loving every moment of it.

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 3:16 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Spotlight keep spreading on moron. Kids are smart. But Who was hiding the evidence? Hope Carl got it. Michel & Lindsay will be in deep sh** by the end of it.

ThankYou for update. Like it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 12:41 am Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Took my rating away again. so here it is

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2019 12:41 am Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Great update.  So happy they are onto Michael.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 4:47 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

All the pieces are falling into place and Lindsay is going down with Michael too 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 2:12 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

First, I forgot to mention in my last chapter review, that Brian probably shouldn't be relating his sexual plights with Justin in front of Lindsay and Michael. It will give them bedtime fantasy-material.

This is turning out to be the dinner from hell.

So, someone from the precinct was hiding evidence before Carl got involved? Was that for Lindsay or Michael's benefit?

Good thing Ben came in and had the keys and business card copy. And Mel's law knowledge gets them around using it.

So, Lindsay is involved! Bitch! I'm going to guess here... but since Brian told Michael a few times that he wasn't going to go... I bet he DID tell Lindsay, and Lindsay ended up calling Michael... maybe even helped plan the bashing.

The only thing I can't understand is WHY and HOW it has taken them this long to piece all the evidence together... because it was in a flashback two years ago, about Carl getting the evidence and him and the kids going through it.

I love how you have taken actual canon events and put your own little twist on them to make this story plausible.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2019 1:20 pm Title: On The Thirteenth, Unluckily for Him, Anniversary Those Pesky Kids Said To Me

Wow it is coming out the scum is floating to the top

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