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Reviewer: MoonQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2019 8:31 pm Title: Hells Bells

Loving this one already. 😍 I have soooo many questions. Is there video proof that Michael followed Brian to the Hotel the Prom was being held.  Is Hunter HIV positive AND the boyfriend of a teenage Gus? 😧 What did Lindsey do to alienate the Family. How old is Jenny? Is there a Britin in the story? Do/will our guys have children together? More please👍

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 6:25 am Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

I absolutely love Hunter's reasoning that Michael couldn't have done it because he wouldn't have a chance against Justin because Justin would kill him!

I am so glad Emmett asked Brian about Michael claiming that Brian begged him to come to the hospital. That has always pissed me off how easily everyone believed Michael's lies and that one was such a petty and pointless lie.

Brian's descriptions of Emmett and Ted - hysterical! Em is so happy to be the ‘warm flat champagne'. And Ted calling himself ‘Mr. Vanilla'! LOL!

Poor Jay-Ray didn't get to listen to Brian describe taking Justin's virginity, but I have a feeling that she wouldn't have much trouble getting either Gus or Hunter to tell her.

Brilliant idea bringing David back to corroborate that Michael's knee was injured that night!

Really looking forward to the next chapter!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:09 am Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Oh Crap! Michael Is So Dead They May Have To Bury Him Thrice!

If they have the medical report and a statement from the from the doctor and nurse who treated him then there is no way he can un-prove all the facts.

And I bet he stupidly called his Cuntly, White In Crime to gloat?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 5:47 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

I never thought I would appreciate David's appearance! Well done! Who did contact him? Carl? Brian? Somebody else?

Jenny is hilarious and so is Ted, the vanilla friend.

Emmett is very observant and a very great friend too!

I hope Daphne will join the fireworks.

I love these "V3" and "My legs follow the mind of my cock".

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 3:00 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

So it has taken 15 years for things to catch up with Michael.  Wonderful.  Jen Jay is so precocious, just how old is she?

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 1:44 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Can Michael dig his grave any deeper? No one but the blonde harpy is on his side. Ain't that a shame. She'll throw him under the bus as quickly as she can throw him.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 12:34 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Interesting concept. Yes, I can imagine just how Michael would pale upon seeing David, as he would be the only one able to testify to Michael's injury.

Lindsay trying to separate them... was this about her interfering and Justin going to NY... or... did she purposely put Justin in Ethan's path?

Great update! I especially like the fact that you brought up the night Gus was born... I recently talked with Wren regarding that same plot, and convinced her to take that very idea and run with it.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it. And again thank you for the plot point! I hadn't thought of that angle for Ethan. 

Happy reading

Hugs - Nicoole

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 12:14 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Oh wow, what a great chapter.  I liked Dr. David more than Mikey so I am happy he is on Brian & Justin's side.  Love this story.  Fantastic writing as always.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2019 1:34 am Title: Hells Bells

Lots going on in this chapter.  Hopefully in later chapters we will get some backstory.  I always love when Michael is the bad guy.  Go team.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 29, 2019 3:59 pm Title: Hells Bells

What an amazing start! Fireworks from everywhere! Very promising plot!

I love that Brian chose Cynthia for this momentous event.

My favorite parts:

squuddle: is it a contraction of squeeze and cuddle?

Go sit in the corner, Baby, nobody cares.” Ted sneers at her.: Is it a reference to Dirty Dancing?)

“If my nails were as sharp as you are making out, then your eyes would be on the end of them!” Justin spits. “Now go sit like the bottom boy you are!”



Author's Response:

Hiya,

Yes indeedy it is a contraction of those two words and yes to Dirty Dancing too. If Michael is lucky, there will be some of him left to go to jail with by the time the Stud and Sunshine get through with him.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2019 11:14 am Title: Hells Bells

wow, cant wait for update

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2019 1:02 am Title: Hells Bells

Yes! I love it! So glad you grabbed the bunny and have started posting!

Love how they have gathered everyone together to announce their wedding plans and expose who bashed Justin. Looks like Deb won't be falling for Michael's BS, but will keep my fingers crossed that she doesn't fall for anything he comes up with.

Michael's lucky Justin's nails aren't as sharp as he exaggerated! But I'm sure Justin would want Michael to see what's coming to him! LOL!

Thank you so much for taking on this bunny! Looking forward to the next chapter!

*HUGS*

Deb

Reviewer: lizw102 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 11:22 pm Title: Hells Bells

Another great one from my favorite writer. Hooked and ready for a good ole Anti-Michael story!!! And alway a plus with Anti-Lindsay too!!

Love it can't wait for more.

 

Liz 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 6:20 pm Title: Hells Bells

Can't Say I Am Surprised Michael Tried ago Kill Justin.

more Surprised it Wasn't Lindsay Though?

Brian and Justin are getting married, Justin is adopting Gus!!

Lindsay cheating with men is about as shocking as her jealousy that Brian doesn't want her or Michael's constant whining.

 Totally Hooked Now😀

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 1:30 pm Title: Hells Bells

Oh boy. After 15 yrs Mikey and Lindsay haven't changed on bit.

Go ahead Michael, explain that one.

 

Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 11:31 am Title: Hells Bells

Brilliant start. Can't wait to read what is coming next. Love the anti Michael stories

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 11:30 am Title: Hells Bells

Oh boy.  A new and completely unusual story.  Can't wait to find out where you take us with this one.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 11:11 am Title: Hells Bells

Awesome cliffhanger. I'm absolutely positive I am not alone in hoping for very quick updates to this. Fabulous start.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 10:19 am Title: Hells Bells

Can you update like 3 times a day, 7 days a week? Like seriously, put the other stories on hiatus and focus pretty please on this one!!! um a huge fan of yours but this one feels better than all the rest! um not above begging ill let you know!!!! 



Author's Response:


Thanks for the positive review. As tempting as that is, as I have to admit that I couldn't wait to write this one once I knew what the PB was, I will have to continue the others aqt the same time.

Happy reading

MissMerlot

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 9:01 am Title: Hells Bells

Wow,this is great.  Love it except of course, the cliffhanger, but that makes the best stories.  Can't wait to see where you go with this.  Wonderful writing.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 9:00 am Title: Hells Bells

Hmm... got the email that one of my fave authors started her story. Is this where I say.... good thing I asked you about THAT plot bunny? 😁

Oh well... loved the first chapter. Although I AM curious how Deb is aware of that knowledge when Carl said he hadn't told her.

I'm going to assume that the Tiffany's box is the clue that lead to the knowledge of who the basher was.

Looking forward to see where you go with this.

HUGS  ~Cathy

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On A Side Note: I got the summary from Deb, too. So, watch for my interpretation coming soon!



Author's Response:

Hey Cathy,

I am waiting very [im]patiently for yours. You are indeed right about the box but that was just the start. 

Hugs,

Nicole

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 8:06 am Title: Hells Bells

I love this beginning! I will try to read each chapter because there I have the breath cut !! I want to know too. Thank you for this new story.

Reviewer: Auggie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2019 8:05 am Title: Hells Bells

I am already excited about this. Love that it starts off with Michael being found out. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with all of us.

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